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HiddenHaito

Posts: 2

Reykjavík, Höfuðborgarsvæðið, Iceland

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Feb 25 25 05:34 pm Link

Makeup Artist

ShadowBox Studio MUA

Posts: 79

Kitchener, Ontario, Canada

Hey! Your model, posing and softbox lighting is lovely.
If you'd like something that might make it a bit more dramatic, I have a few suggestions.
- Try placing the model on a box below the draped fabric.  This will elongate the form of the model.
- Using more directional lighting, instead of a softbox, will bring a 'chiaroscuro' quality to the lighting which will provide a bit more contrast to the image.
- The grey background and red fabric are a similar tonal value, so either go with a lighter background and darker fabric, or vice versa, will give it more contrast.

Mar 09 25 05:05 pm Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2240

Taylors, South Carolina, US

My main suggestion would be that the lighting is a little simplistic. The background has no light helping with separation, nor are there any edge lights or other highlights on the model.

Mar 13 25 03:54 pm Link