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Money where my mouth is, feel free to critique. 18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/48667954 Aug 06 25 11:35 am Link Black and white vs color. Good choice.
Well done with your "grain" and/or "contrast" settings. Wood porch, the chair, wood cabins in the background... all are very interesting. So many elements in the image are extremely captivating... but the model is competing with those other elements. Great pose, but no emotion from the model... I don't think the emotion level of the model matches the emotional level of the setting. Sep 04 25 10:46 pm Link Lovely image, Good composition and tone.
Excellent image as is. If I were to nit pick.... I would probably photoshop out the tattoo on the model. (it distracts) and I might have brought the front crop out a bit to be more consistent in showing the front edge of the deck boards. Sep 05 25 08:40 am Link rolfe james photography wrote: I tend to agree, there are just too many competing and conflicting elements, the overall effect is a little confusing. Notice how by cropping closely on the model you would eliminate about 75% of the picture area. Sep 06 25 10:14 am Link OK. An image of a young model with a background in disarray or decay. A theme where entropy comes to mind. The background might be a little busy but I like it. It's a theme I've used in shooting in ghost towns and old abandoned sites. Sep 06 25 10:57 am Link rxz wrote: There's a well-known set of pictures of 1950s model Kathy Suits in a ghost town-like setting;
Sep 08 25 01:57 am Link Richard Blackstone wrote: I make black & whites of most images I shoot of models in addition to color for they bring out different details to mood.
Sep 08 25 07:28 am Link Cheers for the feedback. Critique is like oxygen for me, I’d rather breathe it in than hold my breath.
Perfection is never real, but chasing it keeps the work moving forward. Thanks again. Sep 10 25 05:04 pm Link Richard Blackstone wrote: It is a simple image, which is great, black and white which is great as well. The thing that is a huge problem is lines cut,, the lines cut into her head and cut off her fingers and feet. There is a lot of line work here, that shot may not be possible here, that angle. The wood is great here but you need to stop the lines from cutting the model,,, blanket on the floor to separate her from the wood.
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