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Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Akara Fang wrote:
Would love your input :-)

First impressions: Old timer
Your Skill level: Proper for the genre
Your creativity:  Photographer driven
Specific  style: Fetish erotic
Your Work focus & Your challenges: Open to most genres but  Limited persona.
Your MM Profile usefulness: Detailed and informative
Paid assignments: Yes
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I am noticing the time passed and you no longer need your old photos. Focus on your new look and go from there. I feel that older photos and concepts are produced with better skills whereas the new ones lack affinity. Because I am very old school my opinion is that your large behind the leg huge tattoo is not working with stockings boudoirs but might work if you switch to more burlesque looks instead of glamour.
Do you make my list?: No

Mar 28 25 04:52 am Link

Photographer

UrbanClick

Posts: 2

Orillia, Ontario, Canada

yes please

Nov 03 25 11:17 am Link

Photographer

Igyphoto

Posts: 2

San Jose, California, US

Hi, I'd like to participate, please. Thanks in advance!

Nov 05 25 10:48 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

UrbanClick wrote:
yes please

First impressions: Standard portfolio from fashion to bw art.

Specific  style: Commercial, Glamour

Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point.
Your challenges: Your Light can be a finicky at times
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/251028/10/6901021940e56_m.jpg
What I like:  https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/251103/11/6909009c2d356.jpg it's the character.
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/48739614 unflattering to model https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/48739607 over blown and out of focus
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: some of your photos lack contrast, bad cropping on head https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/48739602 bw photos are fine but high key photos lack detail. I see some awkward crops. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46992695 work for a better cosmetic approach when you photograph women.
Do you make my list?: No

Nov 18 25 04:55 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Igyphoto wrote:
Hi, I'd like to participate, please. Thanks in advance!

First impressions: Nice balance in work.
Your Work focus: Fashion Glamour Lifestyle
Your MM Profile usefulness: Useful.
Paid assignments: Yes
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your studio shots in front of the seamless are glamorous but remember to change the lighting scheme for fashion photography. You need to improve your models' posing. Keep shooting. Your Nikons are awesome.
Do you make my list?: No

Nov 18 25 05:15 am Link

Photographer

GMNEPhotography

Posts: 1

Chicago, Illinois, US

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

Dec 24 25 02:44 pm Link

Digital Artist

Mani67

Posts: 3

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

Go for it

Jan 09 26 11:13 am Link

Photographer

Focuspuller

Posts: 2998

Los Angeles, California, US

Varton wrote:

First impressions: NSFW work
Your Work focus: Erotic
Not sure why you have buildings, tigers and foxes in your portfolio because your dominant style is erotic.

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: It would have been too time consuming to open all 292 photos you have in your port but the ones I opened gives me an idea of your skills compatible with the genre.
Do you make my list?: No

Thanks. Very helpful.

Mar 02 26 03:38 pm Link