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Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Kitten Kaboodle wrote:
Go for it C:

you have a gorgeous look and nice port
I don't like much the wide angle in pics where your shoes are bigger then your head big_smile
I guess in this one you are meant to be a doll,
face expression is lifeless but I like the hair colors and sexy pink fishnets on this one, and heavenly heels.
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15731012
listed

Apr 25 11 03:44 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

L Blackthorne wrote:
Me?

your port needs some fashion looks
I did not like the face painting much in that beach photo
I also find that the nudity did not add much in that one IMHO
anyway I love this one
beautiful sepia  full of life.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101005/22/4cac090282ee7_m.jpg
listed

Apr 25 11 04:40 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Extrimalka wrote:
Perfect! Please!

your port needs work.
I love the outfit but hate the background and cut off legs that was a crime

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101201/19/4cf70bc88a37d_m.jpg
anyway my fav in your port is this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110213/15/4d5863d8eba2a_m.jpg
super make up and that unusual yellow color adds an outstanding touch to your beauty.
listed

Apr 25 11 04:47 am Link

Model

Official_Cat

Posts: 1831

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

me?

Apr 25 11 04:47 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Ashley Odorizzi wrote:
Yes please smile.

Like this spooky one as a concept but you have much better to list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101104/20/4cd378bd05f99_m.jpg
you should be proud of this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110112/17/4d2e4f4296c8f_m.jpg
great job in bringing all your wild feminine sensuality
listed

Apr 25 11 04:53 am Link

Photographer

El Mercurio

Posts: 1784

Houston, Texas, US

Woah! This thread is a serious commitment smile
I'll have a go if you're still at it.

Apr 25 11 04:53 am Link

Model

Erin Feehan

Posts: 128

Des Moines, Iowa, US

Me please and thank you

Apr 25 11 04:57 am Link

Photographer

Sergio Fotographer

Posts: 160

Chicago, Illinois, US

I'm in!

Apr 25 11 05:02 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Official_Cat wrote:
me?

love your look and port.
You are great poser
I liked the one below, gorgeous pose and great concept but your stockings are a total mismatch and worst they mess up the shot by stealing the focus away from the real beauty, your face,  and creating an unnecessary distraction. smile
Classic RTH nylons would have been a better fit here
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110128/05/4d42c00335826_m.jpg
This one is a kind of cute but not very well imaged.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101218/07/4d0cd4e1e25a6_m.jpg
It’s a shame I would loved to list it if it was not low contrast and colors shifting towards yellow.
Oh well never mind, you are still perfect in it.

I like this a lot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110323/02/4d89bbea8deaf_m.jpg
Your best and listed
This one too!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110307/07/4d75000cb4cb4_m.jpg
Very pretty and old school style shoot I love
listed

Apr 25 11 06:23 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

El Mercurio  wrote:
Woah! This thread is a serious commitment smile
I'll have a go if you're still at it.

You have talent and style,
Love your concepts like this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090425/16/49f3968c73a00_m.jpg
But prefer this for my list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090115/10/496f83f663350_m.jpg
The vintage vibe and the drama is obvious.
Keep up the great work.
Love your diverse capabilities.

Apr 25 11 06:29 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Erin Feehan wrote:
Me please and thank you

Overall nice port but here is my 2 cent
From your stretched neck muscles I can tell you are not comfortable with your posture and too tense in this one.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101130/06/4cf50f0ad1571_m.jpg
Despite gorgeous mile long legs and hot heels I would remove it.
This is your best and listed
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101205/14/4cfc0e702da93_m.jpg
Love the eye contact.

Apr 25 11 06:38 am Link

Photographer

jacinta Rosewarne

Posts: 196

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'd love to know!

Apr 25 11 06:41 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

SergioV Photography wrote:
I'm in!

You are a top notch thog
and I picked this one in a heart beat for my list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110312/22/4d7c669533f82_m.jpg
you have many more like this, well styled and sexy without revealing much.
great job, keep clicking. wink

Apr 25 11 06:42 am Link

Model

M E L U X I N E

Posts: 1204

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Go for it smile

Apr 25 11 07:12 am Link

Photographer

El Mercurio

Posts: 1784

Houston, Texas, US

varton wrote:

You have talent and style,
Love your concepts like this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090425/16/49f3968c73a00_m.jpg
But prefer this for my list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090115/10/496f83f663350_m.jpg
The vintage vibe and the drama is obvious.
Keep up the great work.
Love your diverse capabilities.

Thanks! smile

Apr 25 11 07:18 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

jacinta Rosewarne wrote:
I'd love to know!

This one makes me uncomfortable to watch
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110425/03/4db549434c608_m.jpg
she gives a half inflated doll feel. smile
anyway, you do great work and enjoyed visiting your port
My fav for my list is the one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110225/04/4d67a03e6f2b7_m.jpg
I hope the flower blurs are natural and not post retouch job.
keep it up
super job!

Apr 25 11 07:30 am Link

Model

Erin Feehan

Posts: 128

Des Moines, Iowa, US

varton wrote:

Overall nice port but here is my 2 cent
From your stretched neck muscles I can tell you are not comfortable with your posture and too tense in this one.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101130/06/4cf50f0ad1571_m.jpg
Despite gorgeous mile long legs and hot heels I would remove it.
This is your best and listed
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101205/14/4cfc0e702da93_m.jpg
Love the eye contact.

Thank you VERY much smile

Apr 25 11 07:37 am Link

Photographer

John Barone

Posts: 1354

Wolverhampton, England, United Kingdom

smile

Apr 25 11 07:37 am Link

Model

Mel Valenzuela

Posts: 37

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

I've only been at this for a while, but I'd love to know what you think of me.

Please and thank you! smile

Apr 25 11 07:38 am Link

Model

Brad Thomas

Posts: 3

Oviedo, Florida, US

You have so many... But if you still have time, you should do mine smile

Apr 25 11 07:45 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Meluxine wrote:
Go for it smile

I love your profile wording probably as much as your look and port.

Endearingly misanthropic female seeking ridiculously good looking but antisocial male. Must like lawn bowls, penguins, bubble tea and me being naked on the internet. A job at the Large Hadron Collider is preferable, although I will accept someone who is friends with Stephen Hawking, David Attenborough and/or Radiohead.

big_smile, you are really after an endangered species kind LOL
anyway, you know what, you are hot.
wink
let's get started

I am not going to bore anyone by talking about the good ones
Like this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100612/10/4c13c29debc50_m.jpg
Listed.
I wish this one was a bit less Charlie Chaplin style in saturation.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090125/06/497c7bb7cd3aa_m.jpg
I love your dare in this one and real womanly curves
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16364672
You can be boring
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100314/07/4b9cf25370ebe_m.jpg
Or fun
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090216/05/49996bde9ff68_m.jpg
Sexy
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9483677
Latex Naughty
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110404/15/4d9a443517f32_m.jpg
or a diva who means business
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100302/17/4b8dbacbb1294_m.jpg
So, to sum up, in one word, you are , wonderful!

Apr 25 11 07:46 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

John Barone wrote:
smile

You give me an avant garde feel,
Love your port, you are talented and know exactly what you are doing.
Your latex and fetish work is outstanding.
I like the style on this one but it is shot on wrong model
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22459327
I love this one with nipple stud, but one simple comment; keep the garter belts pulled always up to the belly button level and panties should be worn over last, only if you really want to make the ultimate fetish erotic statement.
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17779321

But my best pick by far is the one below
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21444521
this is awesome work, and her pose is so well done I have the suspicion she has been coached to do so
absolutely fabulous job!
this is another on my list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091020/12/4ade0f81cde50_m.jpg
absolutely perfect!

Apr 25 11 08:06 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Mel Valenzuela wrote:
I've only been at this for a while, but I'd love to know what you think of me.

Please and thank you! smile

This is my best pick and the only keeper
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101102/02/4ccfd49031ee4_m.jpg
listed

Apr 25 11 08:09 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Brad Thomas wrote:
You have so many... But if you still have time, you should do mine smile

your port is more slanted towards life style and urban, cool dude look.
You may want to add some fashion and men at work style pics to increase your exposure as model.
I am listing this one that describes you best!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110303/16/4d70318c87016_m.jpg

Apr 25 11 08:12 am Link

Model

AidenSomerville

Posts: 46

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Go for it smile

Apr 25 11 08:34 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

AidenSomerville wrote:
Go for it smile

Hi there smile
Quite honestly the recyclable material you are sitting on appears more interesting to watch then your outfit, which I find quite boring.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110406/04/4d9c522258681_m.jpg
You should work on your hair style as well.
in this one I hate the shirt
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110422/01/4db137f538c01_m.jpg
a lot of shirt, not enough of you!
And you look sad!
Pose confident and less hazy in your photos.
This one below should go on the face book rather then here
I like your drama but too many spots on your face and throat, not attractive
Half of the face is hidden and there is nothing so special about the hood.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110419/23/4dae77cfd3ec8_m.jpg

This is your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110406/04/4d9c52057b844_m.jpg
best pick, the only keeper
listed
You are very handsome and need a good thog to cast character and bring out emotions in the correct context.
You will do great, keep it up!

Apr 25 11 08:45 am Link

Model

Juliamodel

Posts: 69

London, England, United Kingdom

Curious what about mine. I have some more pic but - don't want to  give out at once.
xx JuliaM

Apr 25 11 10:44 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Juliamodel wrote:
Curious what about mine. I have some more pic but - don't want to  give out at once.
xx JuliaM

OK great
Love what you got so far , mostly portraits and bw stuff
I am not sure if it is my monitor, or excessive brushing /brightness in some photos  I am unable to distinguish any contrast in nose and cheek areas
like those
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110420/10/4daf1aef86b5b_m.jpghttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110420/10/4daf1b49ee2d2_m.jpg
I prefer to see more pics before I can list you.
I love your eyes. You would make any thog  look good. ;)Gorgeous job, keep it up.

Apr 25 11 10:51 am Link

Model

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez

Posts: 321

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'd love a critique!!!!!

Thanksss smile

Apr 25 11 10:51 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez wrote:
I'd love a critique!!!!!

Thanksss smile

You are so beautiful and none of the pictures do you justice.

you should not pose naked feet on this one.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110312/19/4d7c3e56dbb0f_m.jpg
This would make my list but the crop is very tight and feels like your head is flat.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110305/18/4d72ef9e8f7e4_m.jpg
It would have been nice to show a bit more of the outfit as well. The copyright smack in the middle is also something I am not so much crazy about.
No lists at this time sorry.
Keep it up, love your look a lot.

Apr 25 11 11:07 am Link

Model

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez

Posts: 321

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

varton wrote:

You are so beautiful and none of the pictures do you justice.

you should not pose naked feet on this one.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110312/19/4d7c3e56dbb0f_m.jpg
This would make my list but the crop is very tight and feels like your head is flat.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110305/18/4d72ef9e8f7e4_m.jpg
It would have been nice to show a bit more of the outfit as well. The copyright smack in the middle is also something I am not so much crazy about.
No lists at this time sorry.
Keep it up, love your look a lot.

Thanks so much for the advice, I'm going to e-crop that pic now... smile

Apr 25 11 11:11 am Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5045

Petaluma, California, US

L Raye wrote:
Which is mine?

(Mostly 18+)

varton wrote:
love this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18174479
makes me dream wink
good job overall.
be more selective while picking models.

Thank you!

Apr 25 11 12:14 pm Link

Model

Randy Potvin

Posts: 188

Rochester, New York, US

Thoughts??

Apr 25 11 12:19 pm Link

Model

E_V_A

Posts: 1722

Redondo Beach, California, US

Me?

Apr 25 11 12:20 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Randy Potvin wrote:
Thoughts??

hello
you posed a bit tense on this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110206/16/4d4f38754f1d6_m.jpg
as if you don't  like the outfit.
love the perspective on this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110206/16/4d4f3b7914dc7_m.jpg
but there is nothing to inspire me to list you
keep up the good work and try to find a designer and photographer  team to work with you.

Apr 25 11 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Miss Eva Marie  wrote:
Me?

You are drop dead gorgeous
like the one below even over brushed
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110418/17/4dacd297e898c_m.jpg
very sexy
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110328/09/4d90b85eb4e09_m.jpg
I hate opaque thights but this is your best to list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101130/12/4cf56570723a7_m.jpg
love your look, great port overall.

Apr 25 11 12:37 pm Link

Model

Randy Potvin

Posts: 188

Rochester, New York, US

Thanks for the feedback!!

Apr 25 11 01:28 pm Link

Model

Official_Cat

Posts: 1831

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

varton wrote:

love your look and port.
You are great poser
I liked the one below, gorgeous pose and great concept but your stockings are a total mismatch and worst they mess up the shot by stealing the focus away from the real beauty, your face,  and creating an unnecessary distraction. smile
Classic RTH nylons would have been a better fit here
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110128/05/4d42c00335826_m.jpg
This one is a kind of cute but not very well imaged.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101218/07/4d0cd4e1e25a6_m.jpg
It’s a shame I would loved to list it if it was not low contrast and colors shifting towards yellow.
Oh well never mind, you are still perfect in it.

I like this a lot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110323/02/4d89bbea8deaf_m.jpg
Your best and listed
This one too!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110307/07/4d75000cb4cb4_m.jpg
Very pretty and old school style shoot I love
listed

thank you so much!!!

Apr 25 11 01:29 pm Link

Model

Kendra from Canada

Posts: 447

Tofino, British Columbia, Canada

Apr 25 11 01:33 pm Link

Model

Vampireleniore

Posts: 664

Modesto, California, US

varton wrote:

With you it was easy wink
all these below goes to my best of the best list
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15607277
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8116025

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091031/14/4aeca8ac0edba_m.jpg
You can make any photographer shine.
Gorgeous work compliments.

^.^ Thank you.

Apr 25 11 01:35 pm Link