Forums > Critique > I will list your best and will tell you why.

Model

GingerL

Posts: 112

Nashville, Tennessee, US

varton wrote:

nice varied work you got.
The handcuffed shots are a miss for me. I find them too generic.
beach shoots ar cool but I see some bad cropping there.
You have some full moons I like wink and found this finally
but nudity should have been optional on this one.

+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15355575
listed, gorgeous posture, love the location l and the drama.

I also love this a lot
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15062443 listed
keep it up
lots of potential and great work.

Thank you. wink

Apr 26 11 08:33 am Link

Photographer

Segovia Photography

Posts: 1401

Los Angeles, California, US

Do mine!

Apr 26 11 08:35 am Link

Model

femmedrenaline

Posts: 2544

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

varton wrote:

You have very nice work. You have worked with many alternative models and I find that very cool
the best in your port is the one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100913/23/4c8f19395780f_m.jpg
listed.
Great job

Thank you! But, uh, I am a model.. Hence so many alt models (me) in my port! Hehe

Thanks for the input! smile

Apr 26 11 08:46 am Link

Photographer

emptyisdoll

Posts: 95

Depok, Yogyakarta, Indonesia

hey there!
i'm in..smile

Apr 26 11 08:49 am Link

Photographer

Alluring Exposures

Posts: 11400

Casa Grande, Arizona, US

Thank you!

varton wrote:

You do great work, you may want to clean up the port a bit. Some shots appeared to me a bit weak and they do not add much. Great skills and style.
this is my fav
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090915/00/4aaf4959a9e1e_m.jpg listed
and this one is great shot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110106/16/4d265d0e154fa_m.jpg
love the style
and pose

Apr 26 11 09:31 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

x Ali wrote:

Thank you! But, uh, I am a model.. Hence so many alt models (me) in my port! Hehe

Thanks for the input! smile

I apologize Ali
I thought I was looking at a photographer's port
you look different in many photos, depending upon who is the photographer.
and it is great, you fooled me
thanks for the correction
You are a fabulous alt model.

Apr 26 11 09:45 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

The Falcons Nest wrote:
My best? Sure. Tell me.

This is by far most spectacular shot you have
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091127/06/4b0fe2214e095_m.jpg listed
another awesome shot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110114/07/4d306700a3359_m.jpg listed

Apr 26 11 09:50 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

GIles PJ wrote:
I am interested.

I see in your port a little bit of everything
very nice job below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110108/04/4d2859dde9be8_m.jpg
but this one below is my fav and your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100118/03/4b544b750d4d2_m.jpg I love the vintage vibes
listed

Apr 26 11 09:55 am Link

Photographer

Science V Romance

Posts: 25

Seattle, Washington, US

Have a look...would love to have your opinion.

Apr 26 11 10:03 am Link

Model

Ash Bain

Posts: 21

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia

I would love to hear your thoughts smile

Apr 26 11 10:13 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Segovia Photography wrote:
Do mine!

Ok some good swimsuit shots you got
nice eye candy below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100718/22/4c43e30922319_m.jpg
and this is what I like the most
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100715/14/4c3f770c43ace_m.jpg
listed

Apr 26 11 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

Stephane Paradis

Posts: 30

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

always looking for comments.  smile

Apr 26 11 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

emptyisdoll wrote:
hey there!
i'm in..smile

not too many to choose from but
This is one is gorgeous and my fav, I think your best as far as comp and soft diffused lighting.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110421/07/4db03d30068ce_m.jpg
listed

Apr 26 11 12:37 pm Link

Model

Diana Duong

Posts: 1005

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'd love to hear your feedback.

Apr 26 11 12:43 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Stephane Paradis wrote:
always looking for comments.  smile

You are a top thog
my pick for my list is
+18
really gorgeous job
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19558416
absolutely stellar work and portfolio

Apr 26 11 12:43 pm Link

Model

JosieJayne

Posts: 79

Chester, England, United Kingdom

Would love to join this game smile

Josie.x

Apr 26 11 12:46 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Science V Romance wrote:
Have a look...would love to have your opinion.

You have a small port but everything is done to the point, from stylish fashion to boudoir nudes
my top pick is below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110311/19/4d7aea7c0a2e8_m.jpg
listed
keep clicking, gorgeous work

Apr 26 11 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Ash Bain wrote:
I would love to hear your thoughts smile

you need perhaps to add some fashion shots to your port
also I am not so crazy about the beauty boudoir shots you have.
I don't like the little tilt on this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/10/4db6fafeb5228_m.jpg
the glass door is a distraction on this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100716/16/4c40e89f145c0_m.jpg
you look amazing on this one and I listed https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/10/4db6fb360afc1_m.jpg

Apr 26 11 12:56 pm Link

Model

MekaMouse

Posts: 2

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I don't have a lot of photos because I have a free account. I was hoping you could comment on my portfolio smile

Apr 26 11 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Diana Duong wrote:
I'd love to hear your feedback.

I love the fetish heels but your clothing top and the car is a total mismatch for a pinup shoot.https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/12/4db71c62938ac_m.jpg
this is my top pick that shows really your beautyhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110308/22/4d772269f05b6_m.jpg listed
this is cute https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110413/22/4da6830bc1bc4_m.jpg
you should add some better fetish/boudoir shoots. the old car pinup concept would be good if you had the right wardrobe and heels.
Your lingerie shoots come to me as boring. Work more on your poses.

Apr 26 11 01:14 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

JosieJayne wrote:
Would love to join this game smile

Josie.x

Josie you are a very beautiful woman.
I listed this even though it is shot too close for my taste and your head is bigger then the rest. smile https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110320/10/4d863f53e6f67_m.jpg
copy right is an eye sore but love patterned thights , gorgeous curves https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110312/14/4d7bef2d03066_m.jpg
super pose and high contrast BW I like but I am  not so crazy about narrow stocking welts https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101109/09/4cd981d1c2f77_m.jpg
Your lingerie shots are not attractive to me. No body language there.
I love the drama in this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110307/06/4d74f2c61c7ce_m.jpg listed

Apr 26 11 01:26 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

MekaMouse wrote:
I don't have a lot of photos because I have a free account. I was hoping you could comment on my portfolio smile

You have such a  cute look.
Your best in photo quality and pose is the one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110419/15/4dae07ba9395d_m.jpg listed
everything else can go back to face book
You need to find a good photographer to spend time with you to beef up the port. wink

Apr 26 11 01:30 pm Link

Model

Emily Jung

Posts: 141

New York, New York, US

Me please!

Apr 26 11 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Emily Jung wrote:
Me please!

I love your look
Add some swimsuit pics.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110214/19/4d59f7b81be37_m.jpg very cute
I don't want to comment on other pics, the copyright stamp is distracting me.
My top pick would be
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110409/20/4da1212653fb3_m.jpg listed.

Apr 26 11 01:35 pm Link

Photographer

From long ago

Posts: 52

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sure, input is always appreciated.

Apr 26 11 01:41 pm Link

Model

femmedrenaline

Posts: 2544

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

varton wrote:

I apologize Ali
I thought I was looking at a photographer's port
you look different in many photos, depending upon who is the photographer.
and it is great, you fooled me
thanks for the correction
You are a fabulous alt model.

Aww thanks!! smile I take is as a compliment when people mistake my port for a photographer's! I try to be diverse, so that's a good thing!

thanks so much for you input and taking the time to look through my stuff! I really appreciate it!

Apr 26 11 01:58 pm Link

Model

Diana Duong

Posts: 1005

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

varton wrote:

I love the fetish heels but your clothing top and the car is a total mismatch for a pinup shoot.https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/12/4db71c62938ac_m.jpg
this is my top pick that shows really your beautyhttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110308/22/4d772269f05b6_m.jpg listed
this is cute https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110413/22/4da6830bc1bc4_m.jpg
you should add some better fetish/boudoir shoots. the old car pinup concept would be good if you had the right wardrobe and heels.
Your lingerie shoots come to me as boring. Work more on your poses.

Thanks!  I've never done pinup style before, would like to start getting into them.. and as for those lingerie shots, for sure I will shoot more of that style to improve them. smile

Apr 26 11 04:47 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Andre Giovanni wrote:
Sure, input is always appreciated.

you have very beautiful work in your port and some excess bagage as well
this is great
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101021/16/4cc0d04b1783d_m.jpglisted
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101217/17/4d0c149ec3e32_m.jpg listed
this boudoir is a bit overexposed
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101228/17/4d1a8bd7d704b_m.jpg
also like to see better field of depth
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101218/18/4d0d6837ba8a0_m.jpg
very nicehttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090228/22/49aa317150d3a_m.jpg

Apr 26 11 05:06 pm Link

Photographer

emptyisdoll

Posts: 95

Depok, Yogyakarta, Indonesia

varton wrote:

not too many to choose from but
This is one is gorgeous and my fav, I think your best as far as comp and soft diffused lighting.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110421/07/4db03d30068ce_m.jpg
listed

thanks for the comment!smile
cheers!

Apr 26 11 05:18 pm Link

Model

RagDollSally

Posts: 431

Santa Barbara, California, US

I don't believe I've asked.. I'd love to know.

Apr 26 11 05:22 pm Link

Model

C_A_M

Posts: 59

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

Please? smile

Apr 26 11 05:26 pm Link

Model

Glamour Jessica

Posts: 2174

New York, New York, US

take a peek

Apr 26 11 05:27 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Abagale Taylor wrote:
I don't believe I've asked.. I'd love to know.

why not? I don't think I am passing anyone from the shredder LOL big_smile

I find your figure very fit and athletic
Love the photo +18
Listed
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22463224
you also have very artistic shots in your port I like.
your fetish or sort of boudoir lingerie kind photos in boots and stockings are ineffective, somewhat boring due to bad cropping and flat lighting.
You can do better under the right guidance with the right photographer.
You may want to add some swimsuit looks, diva looks and fetish alt fashion looks
to beef up your port.
I hope my 2 cent helps

Apr 26 11 05:46 pm Link

Model

RagDollSally

Posts: 431

Santa Barbara, California, US

varton wrote:

why not? I don't think I am passing anyone from the shredder LOL big_smile

I find your figure very fit and athletic
Love the photo +18
Listed
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22463224
you also have very artistic shots in your port I like.
your fetish or sort of boudoir lingerie kind photos in boots and stockings are ineffective, somewhat boring due to bad cropping and flat lighting.
You can do better under the right guidance with the right photographer.
You may want to add some swimsuit looks, diva looks and fetish alt fashion looks
to beef up your port.
I hope my 2 cent helps

Thank you.(:

Those photos are self-shot and from when I first tried 'modeling'. Once I get more work, I'm pretty sure those will be the first to go.

Thank you for the advice.

Apr 26 11 05:52 pm Link

Photographer

Marcel van Es

Posts: 155

Robinson, Texas, US

I'd like your view/opinion smile

Apr 26 11 05:53 pm Link

Model

Sweetheart29

Posts: 161

Rochester, New York, US

I would love to hear which one and why --Thank you for taking the time to give me advice!

Apr 26 11 05:56 pm Link

Model

TaiToya

Posts: 7

Mobile, Alabama, US

try mine! smile

Apr 26 11 05:56 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

C_A_M wrote:
Please? smile

The macro artistic shots like this kind will not get you jobs
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091019/14/4adcde920a6d7_m.jpg it is just eye candy.
it is nice for us to see you have beautiful eyes lips and nose.
but if I want to hire you I want to see you in action, your poses, face expressions and your camera connecton.
love the pic below in this onehttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090502/11/49fc8f2f8b2e0_m.jpg you look really sweet and hot.
this one is too pale otherwise style is good
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090523/13/4a1858c50b00e_m.jpgbut you did not pose well, you look bored,  I see no motivation

in your port the top first 6 photo thumbnails look like web cam shots and do not add anything to your port.
I would suggest you work with as many photographers as possible.
Pick the ones that have the patience to mentor you if possible.

So my best pick is this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090420/14/49eced23987af_m.jpglisted

Apr 26 11 06:17 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Glamour Jessica wrote:
take a peek

Jessica
Your portfolio includes work of some very good photographers and as I look at the pictures I am convinced you like what you do, and adapt easily to the style of each photographer and give your very best.
You have a drop dead gorgeous figure but your beauty lies in your attitude and you have tremendous camera presence. Your portfolio has a good balance of what you should have, editorial fashion and beauty (lingerie etc).
Samples of your published work may consolidate your position but you must never neglect to reinvent yourself.
Before I give my opinion on passing photos and looks I will list failing ones
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110131/10/4d4705ef82f6e_m.jpg (stockings do not look good)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110405/20/4d9bd95025253_m.jpg (flat light low contrast, legs do not look good)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100418/10/4bcb42ef7ec7f_m.jpg ( excellent contrast bad crop)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110305/19/4d7303ea8b2fa_m.jpg (too dark)
Your hottest and absolute best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100221/08/4b81634d1507a_m.jpg listed
Second best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081027/21/490667f03e748_m.jpg listed

Love your sophisticated hot babe look in urban settings https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100307/18/4b945de1b4eeb_m.jpg

I am not so much crazy about the lingerie shots
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101206/00/4cfc9bc4598ec_m.jpg I can only picture you in a secrets in lace style sophisticated lingerie and genuine nylons from (secretsinlace.com)

Apr 26 11 06:59 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Marcel van Es wrote:
I'd like your view/opinion smile

You are very good.
Love the body art a lot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100516/20/4bf0bca5cf4f6_m.jpg listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110119/18/4d379d2c49189_m.jpgThe best portrait in the port, well styled listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100302/22/4b8e0261b95ce_m.jpg best cute photo, listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100830/16/4c7c3a1e78c49_m.jpg too bright for my taste
keep clicking super job

Apr 26 11 07:15 pm Link