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Photographer

Catnapping

Posts: 3774

Lakeville, Massachusetts, US

bunny

Apr 26 11 07:17 pm Link

Photographer

Better Souls

Posts: 128

Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US

varton wrote:

Not too many photos in your port but this one stands out
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110206/20/4d4f7802e9ba7_m.jpg
listed
nice job

Thanks.

And I really do need to upload more. There's way more on my website, and I don't know why I've kept it like that for so long.

Apr 26 11 07:23 pm Link

Model

Kira d-s

Posts: 33

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

would love to hear!

Apr 26 11 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

Marcel van Es

Posts: 155

Robinson, Texas, US

varton wrote:

You are very good.
Love the body art a lot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100516/20/4bf0bca5cf4f6_m.jpg listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110119/18/4d379d2c49189_m.jpgThe best portrait in the port, well styled listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100302/22/4b8e0261b95ce_m.jpg best cute photo, listed

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100830/16/4c7c3a1e78c49_m.jpg too bright for my taste
keep clicking super job

Thank you!! smile

Apr 26 11 07:34 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Sweetheart29 wrote:
I would love to hear which one and why --Thank you for taking the time to give me advice!

Your port look nice, I picked 2 pics that stand really out.
I was not so much crazy about face painting sword and horror style shoots.
you may consider to add some lingerie beauty boudoir or swimsuit shots.

This is a killer look love it https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080409/15/47fd1916f3cb9_m.jpg great make up high contrast bw photo. your eyes stand out.
your best look and my fav below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101028/13/4cc9dc007259e_m.jpg I picked this because it shows many sides of you. fun confident and beautiful.

Apr 26 11 07:38 pm Link

Model

Inactive User

Posts: 112

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Can I get in on the game?

Apr 26 11 07:44 pm Link

Model

CJFearless

Posts: 13

New York, New York, US

^^ same here big_smile

Apr 26 11 07:45 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

TaiToya wrote:
try mine! smile

I love your look a lot,
your port has too many photos taken at the same location, delete some.
add some urban, lifestyle and fun photos
you are cute and exotic, with the right photographer you can build a great port.
Your best is this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110302/19/4d6f0ec59ea5a_m.jpg
and second best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110316/14/4d813042e4840_m.jpg listed
keep it up.

Apr 26 11 07:47 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Wara Photographer wrote:
bunny

hmmm
I picked your best one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101012/13/4cb4c732a1582_m.jpg
listed
all others have flat uneven lightning, bizarre concepts low contrast and visually not appealing at all to me.

smile

Apr 26 11 07:58 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Kira d-s wrote:
would love to hear!

you look gorgeous
You have a small port and I like this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/18/4dab92ea5a5d0_m.jpg
and
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101019/08/4cbdb9b034c53_m.jpg
both listed
you might want to delete some low contrast flat lighted pics like this
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19974077 +18 makes you look flat chested

Apr 26 11 08:03 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Mickey Kennedy wrote:
Can I get in on the game?

I like your versatility
amazing shot
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080913/22/48cc787feb0cd_m.jpglisted
you have some amazing make up work

Apr 26 11 08:07 pm Link

Photographer

talentless

Posts: 18

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

word

Apr 26 11 08:08 pm Link

Model

-Ellie-

Posts: 277

Great Falls, Montana, US

I'll play smile

Apr 26 11 08:08 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Clyde J Folborg wrote:
^^ same here big_smile

very versatile port
this one is your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/18/4db7747e2f413_m.jpg listed

Apr 26 11 08:09 pm Link

Photographer

D j G photography

Posts: 2

Burlington, Massachusetts, US

check it out

Apr 26 11 08:09 pm Link

Model

Kira d-s

Posts: 33

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

varton wrote:

you look gorgeous
You have a small port and I like this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/18/4dab92ea5a5d0_m.jpg
and
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101019/08/4cbdb9b034c53_m.jpg
both listed
you might want to delete some low contrast flat lighted pics like this
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19974077 +18 makes you look flat chested

Thanks for the feedback and lists! really appreciate it smile

Apr 26 11 08:12 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

J A G wrote:
word

You have some great work in your port
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20450112 I love the playtex vintage looking panty girdle listed.
This one below is your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100905/15/4c8419c941d5d_m.jpg listed
in sum you have great skills and talent

Apr 26 11 08:14 pm Link

Photographer

talentless

Posts: 18

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

thank you good sir

Apr 26 11 08:17 pm Link

Model

Jennelyn Joaquin

Posts: 3

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

i wanna play=p

Apr 26 11 08:19 pm Link

Model

Masha Rün

Posts: 538

Pensacola, Florida, US

beep

Apr 26 11 08:20 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

GabrielleAline wrote:
I'll play smile

Gabrielle you have some variety
but your make up job is poorly done
here are the best photos in the bunch
love this one a lot
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19417297 listed
this is your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101214/18/4d082a080d85a_m.jpg
listed
your pic in fishnet was nice but did not like your make up
wish you the best,
you are really drop dead gorgeous with beautiful curves

Apr 26 11 08:22 pm Link

Model

-Ellie-

Posts: 277

Great Falls, Montana, US

varton wrote:

Gabrielle you have some variety
but your make up job is poorly done
here are the best photos in the bunch
love this one a lot
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19417297 listed
this is your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101214/18/4d082a080d85a_m.jpg
listed
your pic in fishnet was nice but did not like your make up
wish you the best,
you are really drop dead gorgeous with beautiful curves

Thanks!
Yeah, mu is really my weak point.  I'm trying to get better though.  It's just hard when I don't really like to wear much to begin with.
smile

Apr 26 11 08:26 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Jennelyn Joaquin wrote:
i wanna play=p

you have a beautiful port.
love this look
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110425/13/4db5d4b0174db_m.jpg
but the contrast and the sharpness is not enough for me to list
This is I think worthy to list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110406/15/4d9ced44ab85b_m.jpg

Apr 26 11 08:27 pm Link

Photographer

wesfoto

Posts: 624

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

You've been at this quite a while, very impressive.  Your dedication has me very interested in what you have to say.

Apr 26 11 08:30 pm Link

Model

Frances Jewel

Posts: 9149

Dayton, Ohio, US

*jumps in line

Apr 26 11 08:31 pm Link

Photographer

L V Pro Imaging

Posts: 681

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I am totally game

Apr 26 11 08:34 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Errin Green wrote:
beep

Love your steampunk style https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110217/19/4d5de6cb566e7_m.jpg

here your pose is excellenthttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110328/13/4d90ebc93eabe_m.jpg love the drama
but I wish the pic was a bit darker

I like your poses, you may want to add other genres to your port like lingerie etc

Apr 26 11 08:36 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

wesfoto wrote:
You've been at this quite a while, very impressive.  Your dedication has me very interested in what you have to say.

you are an amazing photographer
love your artistic touch
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15681546
love the concept amazing bw
this is my fav
great job
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22417945 listed

Apr 26 11 08:41 pm Link

Photographer

Martin G

Posts: 8

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm game!

Apr 26 11 08:43 pm Link

Model

Brightonn

Posts: 234

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

curious as a I have some fresh work up.

Apr 26 11 08:45 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Frances Jewel wrote:
*jumps in line

love your ink
and this postcard like pic is my fav
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090728/07/4a6f0bdc7de41_m.jpg listed
You will do great in alt pinup and fetish modeling
current port has a few hit and miss type pictures.

Apr 26 11 08:49 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

A J Kirchner wrote:
I am totally game

You have style and talent

my best pick is
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22017032 +18 listed
classy and stylish work https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110416/00/4da940794258a_m.jpg she should look a bit down smile and less tense (listed)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110224/18/4d67115ad3cff_m.jpg great shot listed

Apr 26 11 08:54 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Martin G wrote:
I'm game!

original interesting and creative port
love those
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110317/17/4d82a3a462e8f_m.jpg
this one is the one I like most https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110209/19/4d535aed25e76_m.jpg listed

Apr 26 11 08:58 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Brightonn wrote:
curious as a I have some fresh work up.

you are stunning,
great work in your port, nice fashion editorials and make up
love this nice capture of shimmery pantyhose that adds a lot to photo
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110407/19/4d9e724db53ca_m.jpg
I like your new pics but your best expression is this one below
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110302/21/4d6f24c180f30_m.jpg

Apr 26 11 09:06 pm Link

Model

Model Mouse

Posts: 111

Miami, Florida, US

me too plz smile

Apr 26 11 09:11 pm Link

Photographer

wesfoto

Posts: 624

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

varton wrote:

you are an amazing photographer
love your artistic touch
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15681546
love the concept amazing bw
this is my fav
great job
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22417945 listed

Thanks for the list, and for the "amazing".  I don't think I'm there yet, but words of encouragement certainly help.  smile

Apr 26 11 09:12 pm Link

Photographer

SKE Photography

Posts: 209

Temecula, California, US

I would like to know your thoughts.

Apr 26 11 09:16 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

And from mine?

Apr 26 11 11:42 pm Link

Photographer

FotoMark

Posts: 2978

Oxnard, California, US

I'm interested.

Apr 26 11 11:49 pm Link

Model

Nicholas DeLisi

Posts: 5

Tampa, Florida, US

My port is young yet, but I'd live to know.

Apr 27 11 12:02 am Link