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Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Stephanie Pearle wrote:
I'm in smile

Your port is probably the happiest in mayhem. I see there always a gorgeous smile, and happiness. I like it. You look like you enjoy what you do and that's excellent.
this one is great but feet were cut off
you should remove this one +18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20882318
it is not artistic enough due to settings contrast and looks. It makes you look bloated due to cropping and background.

your best listed
gorgeous drop dead body, but pay attention for your bw nudes
some are not that much flattering in my opinion.

Apr 28 11 04:29 am Link

Photographer

Rhiannon Jansma

Posts: 71

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

I'd like to play smile

Apr 28 11 04:38 am Link

Photographer

Jar Concengco

Posts: 224

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

Me please if you're still going. Cheers!

Apr 28 11 04:40 am Link

Photographer

Rhiannon Jansma

Posts: 71

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Totally posted twice :s

Apr 28 11 04:43 am Link

Model

Stephanie Pearle

Posts: 43

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

varton wrote:

Your port is probably the happiest in mayhem. I see there always a gorgeous smile, and happiness. I like it. You look like you enjoy what you do and that's excellent.
this one is great but feet were cut off
you should remove this one +18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20882318
it is not artistic enough due to settings contrast and looks. It makes you look bloated due to cropping and background.

your best listed
gorgeous drop dead body, but pay attention for your bw nudes
some are not that much flattering in my opinion.

Thank you! smile
I've lost 20+ lbs in the last 6 months so that's why I'm heavier in my older photos.

Apr 28 11 04:51 am Link

Photographer

Concepts 5 Photography

Posts: 80

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Hi I'm interested if you are still doing this.

Apr 28 11 04:56 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Stephanie Pearle wrote:
Thank you! smile
I've lost 20+ lbs in the last 6 months so that's why I'm heavier in my older photos.

Yes but with careful posing and the right camera angles and controlled light that could have been fixed.

It would be better you remove the older photos, that do not represent your current look.

Keep it up. Great job.

Apr 28 11 05:08 am Link

Model

Sarah Mclaren

Posts: 37

Maitland, New South Wales, Australia

I'm new here - i'd love to know

Apr 28 11 05:19 am Link

Photographer

David Moss Photography

Posts: 18

Norwich, England, United Kingdom

Another noob here !! What do you reckon to my work so far ??

Apr 28 11 05:28 am Link

Model

jfjoefox

Posts: 1

Harpenden, England, United Kingdom

Me plz

Apr 28 11 05:30 am Link

Photographer

ContentiousReality

Posts: 1094

West Springfield, Massachusetts, US

I'll play

Apr 28 11 06:31 am Link

Model

xzoeyx

Posts: 269

Chester, England, United Kingdom

Apr 28 11 06:36 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Nelia wrote:
Ok... I'll play.

I love your erotic nudes, they are really good because you shoot the model that has the right look for it and you master the light.
this below is a must see
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/3032654
I hate to see you cut off the part of the pumps in this one, it would have been better to shift the model a bit towards left to get everything in and make this picture perfect. She posed so well and her expression is perfect. Oh well listing anyway. smile
In general your style is what "you see is what you get" kind, boldly shot (good)
+18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5091897 (like how hand bra actually reveals the nipple here. listed)
and also including some great artistic implied nudes,
you may want to add some clothed shoots as well to your port wink looking good.

Apr 28 11 06:49 am Link

Photographer

KC King

Posts: 850

Brea, California, US

varton wrote:

I enjoyed visiting your port
you have beautiful nudes, creative horror shows as well :}
I love your editing as well.
Creative shot here

This is my favorite listed

Thanks! Everyone just loves Kym...

Apr 28 11 06:51 am Link

Photographer

IMAGESBYMAGIC

Posts: 5344

Manteca, California, US

Next Please

Apr 28 11 06:58 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Erin McGuire wrote:
hit me!

Erin you are so pretty but you must work on your poses and face expressions.
pose no good, expression uncertain smile love the dress, rare in trailer parks.
This one is great but unable to distinguish if it is you. smile
This is really you but you posed lifeless, picture is flat.
This one is the best in looks and quality listed in my cute list.
remove this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22382660
and https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22332124
add some lingerie and fashion and you are good to go wink

Apr 28 11 07:00 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Moodscapes wrote:
... if you're still going - thanks.

You have great mastery on light, and camera angles. You are a story teller and also have humor. Your work is outstanding in the sense where you take advantage of your cast characters -> https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15982708 or the beauty of a location and are able to combine with your subject and come up with some original concepts-> I hope she has wireless coverage there LOL wink
I love your surreal visions (listed) and beauty boudoirs. +18 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20422958 listed

Keep clicking, it was a pleasure to visit your port wink

Apr 28 11 07:10 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Rhiannon Jansma wrote:
I'd like to play smile

Rhiannon I love your port, you have talent style and vision, you are very artistic and you pay attention to details. Your work is really good. Especially the work you have shot with male models.
It was hard to pick but I have 2 favorites in the bunch. I love this one, very soft and moody even though I don't like the cropping, love the light scheme and her vibes, listed

and this great perfection! my fav, listed.

Excellent work, certainly not the run of the mill.

Apr 28 11 07:23 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Jar Concengco wrote:
Me please if you're still going. Cheers!

I love your work, fashion, editorial, bridal you name it...
Love this one listed
Your port has only 20 pics but still it was hard to pick your best to list

and this is the one: love the fashion statement, the light gorgeous pose and background

great job. wink

Apr 28 11 07:31 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Wild Shots 5 wrote:
Hi I'm interested if you are still doing this.

Yep, you shoot mostly indoors, and I can see you have worked with many beautiful starter models. 2 immediate reactions; 1-try to coach them better on their poses and better yet put a full height mirror behind you so they can see their expression and posture. 2- Try to improve lighting.
I like this one I feel it was posed great with wonderful wardrobebut I don't like the flat lighting and low contrast.
I like your creative vibes in this one great expression and mua job. Not strong enough for me to list either of them.

You need to perfect your lighting to create drama on beauty boudoir shots, having gorgeous creatures posing in nylons and lace will not be enough if you can not master the light. Your work will come out lifeless and will be pretty much difficult to correct by photoshop. just my 2 cent.
Take care and wish you the best. wink

Apr 28 11 07:47 am Link

Photographer

Rhiannon Jansma

Posts: 71

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

varton wrote:

Rhiannon I love your port, you have talent style and vision, you are very artistic and you pay attention to details. Your work is really good. Especially the work you have shot with male models.
It was hard to pick but I have 2 favorites in the bunch. I love this one, very soft and moody even though I don't like the cropping, love the light scheme and her vibes, listed

and this great perfection! my fav, listed.

Excellent work, certainly not the run of the mill.

Thankyou!! Your comments have absolutely made my day! I hope you have a wonderful day too!!

Apr 28 11 07:49 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Peaches Mclaren wrote:
I'm new here - i'd love to know

Hello there,
you have some really beautiful shots in your port
my fav: listed

I love your bubbly personality too wink
and this one is well posed and love the dress and nylons listed
and "Les chute de reins" I wish this was sharper

love your look, you may want to add more lingerie glamor and beauty shots and portraits done with the right photographer. Good luck to you.

Apr 28 11 07:56 am Link

Model

Sherice S

Posts: 32

Brooklyn, New York, US

MY BEST??

Apr 28 11 08:04 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

David Moss Photography wrote:
Another noob here !! What do you reckon to my work so far ??

Hello David,
I love high contrast beautiful bw work you have in your port
but in contrast to what I have said, I would personally remove this one +18 below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21309246
I don't see any point of posting a photo with this kind of excessive softening.
I know from what I see, you could shot this model better and the right higlight and shadows could mask her nipples if she objected to show.

My fav in the bunch is this:

your best! wink listed

Apr 28 11 08:08 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

jfjoefox wrote:
Me plz

Ok my friend, you look fit and handsome.
the best in your port is listed.
I like particularly the hard shadows cast on the wall. It emphasizes your manhood in a way . big_smile
Keep it up.

Apr 28 11 08:12 am Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2039

Chicago, Illinois, US

You still going?

Apr 28 11 08:18 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

ContentiousReality wrote:
I'll play smile

Overall great job, and I like your concepts for bondage and domination niche markets great contrasted work. sensual with careful balance not to shift to porn.
Renata is my favorite, great tonal balance here
and listed.
absolutely gorgeous color shots as well,listed
this one is a bit weak https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18500572
this one doesn't add much https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19647267
this one is too yellow for my taste https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18178084 although a killer figure and pose there smile
keep it up, you are doing great. wink

Apr 28 11 08:22 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

xzoeyx wrote:
smile

Zoey, you are gorgeous and you pose well.
this one probably describes the best what I mean
I love your generous feminine curves, poses reflect personality and flexibility.

I love this look, it may not be the best in your port
bot love the teasey smile a lot
You would make a gorgeous pinup. wink and a lingerie diva.
my best to you.

Apr 28 11 08:37 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Tylea Stuckey wrote:
MY BEST??

This one

smile

Apr 28 11 10:08 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

jwilliamphoto wrote:
You still going?

I see some very nice work in your port
I love this but there is obvious motion blur on legs, excellent shot with vintage vibes otherwise.
a really bad pose even if she has gorgeous legs and wearing nylons.

your best and the way to go smile listed

be aware and spend time on coaching models for their best angles.
keep it up.

Apr 28 11 10:25 am Link

Photographer

Vivid Impressions

Posts: 121

Tampa, Florida, US

I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Thanks,
Joe

Apr 28 11 10:30 am Link

Photographer

Alexander Image

Posts: 1477

Edison, New Jersey, US

How about mine?

Apr 28 11 10:32 am Link

Model

Jacqueline MP

Posts: 18

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

I know I don't have much so far but I'm curious!

Apr 28 11 10:37 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Vivid Impressions wrote:
I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Thanks,
Joe

Nice job you've got here,
I am listing this but I feel that it can be touched up a little more. smile Listed and my fav
Some of your outdoor nude shots are generally not well posed. essentially they are plain nude photos without expression drama or humor.
examples all +18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21914242
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21922301
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21914235

this is probably the best posed on your port listed.
I find this is the best you got as far as concept and skill involved in capturing it.

great job.

Apr 28 11 10:49 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Alexander Image wrote:
How about mine?

small port but found few treasures. smile
simple and great perspective here it would have been great if you had a wardrobe person for better fashion statement. It was a missed opportunity.
Really great catch here would prefer this in portrait not landscape mode.
This is your best and my fav listed, great shadow casts, super pose and capture.
These are the only eye catchers I found
keep it up you can do better.

Apr 28 11 11:00 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Jacqueline MP wrote:
I know I don't have much so far but I'm curious!

Jaqueline, you are pretty but there is nothing in your port that shows your potential.
The easy thing to do is to get some beach shots with colorful hot swim suits. Do couple of high heel shots in a pretty dress.
this one is for now the best you have got
but if you don't house clean soon and shoot with a decent photographer no one will ring your bell wink
good luck to you and all my best.

Apr 28 11 11:05 am Link

Photographer

Alexander Image

Posts: 1477

Edison, New Jersey, US

varton wrote:

small port but found few treasures. smile
simple and great perspective here it would have been great if you had a wardrobe person for better fashion statement. It was a missed opportunity.
Really great catch here would prefer this in portrait not landscape mode.
This is your best and my fav listed, great shadow casts, super pose and capture.
These are the only eye catchers I found
keep it up you can do better.

Thanks!

Apr 28 11 11:08 am Link

Model

Official Cam

Posts: 5

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

I'd like to play!! =]

Apr 28 11 11:13 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Cam English wrote:
I'd like to play!! =]

Cameron, you are a gorgeous mom
love it listed
in great shape and this is my fav listed
good luck to you, add more looks to your port smile

Apr 28 11 11:49 am Link

Photographer

Vivid Impressions

Posts: 121

Tampa, Florida, US

varton wrote:

Nice job you've got here,
I am listing this but I feel that it can be touched up a little more. smile Listed and my fav
Some of your outdoor nude shots are generally not well posed. essentially they are plain nude photos without expression drama or humor.
examples all +18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21914242
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21922301
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21914235

this is probably the best posed on your port listed.
I find this is the best you got as far as concept and skill involved in capturing it.

great job.

Apr 28 11 11:49 am Link

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