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Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Tifanie Covington wrote:
mee tooooo smile

Ok Tifanie
you look beautiful, nice figure
I am not sure what you are adjusting here smilehttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110422/15/4db1fc8725a4a_m.jpg but a nice location wink
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110412/15/4da4cba504afe_m.jpg it could have been naughtier if you have pulled out a g string LOL
also, gum alert with this laugh.
In this one you make the photo https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110419/16/4dae1b47e0819_m.jpg listed.
You need to run some house cleaning on a few and add more looks. Missing lingerie and glamour.

Apr 27 11 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

Christian Sennesvik

Posts: 47

Oslo, Oslo, Norway

Could you look at mine to, please?

Apr 27 11 01:09 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Heather LoveJoy wrote:
hit me with it baby!

Hello Heather
Your 2 best
very nice https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110427/07/4db82e48bb611_m.jpg
I see attitude and eye contacthttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110427/07/4db82e2890312_m.jpg fabulous wild look, listed
Everything looks good but depending upon what you are interested in you may want to add more looks and get rid of flat lighted ones.

Apr 27 11 01:13 pm Link

Photographer

KC King

Posts: 850

Brea, California, US

Curious, since I'm so all over the place.

Apr 27 11 01:18 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Jouella wrote:
I'd like to know smile

You look drop dead gorgeous https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/071105/09/472f2cc14eded_m.jpg listed awesome mua job
looks oughful, https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18632173 delete
You have a unique look and will do great
add some real lingerie glamour to show off your assets with the right photographer.
shifted too much towards yellow and dark https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110327/22/4d9017a784b3c_m.jpg

keep it up you're g@@d

Apr 27 11 01:19 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Shawn Husseain wrote:
what fun!

Immediately, Your best so far https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110327/11/4d8f7e37d0268_m.jpg listed.

I love this one too https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100617/09/4c1a47004e923_m.jpg listed

Good luck to you , great start

Apr 27 11 01:26 pm Link

Photographer

Martin G

Posts: 8

Los Angeles, California, US

varton wrote:

original interesting and creative port
love those
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110317/17/4d82a3a462e8f_m.jpg
this one is the one I like most https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110209/19/4d535aed25e76_m.jpg listed

Apr 27 11 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

Martin G

Posts: 8

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks for your time, Varton.  Your efforts are greatly appreciated!

Apr 27 11 01:32 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

punkuate wrote:
Please! smile

hmmmm
I am not sure if those are mary janes with stockingshttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110321/03/4d872b8d673ee_m.jpg, don't like the pose and can not see her expression.
Great job, the overcast and resulting color contrast works well here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110402/16/4d97b6d2b3032_m.jpg
your best https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110321/03/4d872f965ccc8_m.jpg listed
some really great outdoor shots
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110321/04/4d8730752379b_m.jpg
and some failed shots smile https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110427/02/4db7e6fef3cd9_m.jpg light is awkward
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22104094 the light scheme is not effective and do not render the mood you wanted.

love this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110321/03/4d872de360457_m.jpg
overall I have a positive opinion on your work
keep it up

Apr 27 11 01:39 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

_MIA wrote:
Me too?

this is the  best in your port,https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090608/01/4a2cc9f8a2dc6_m.jpg I like the mysery in your smirk
I don't like the way it is chopped on top that's why I did not list it. Noting else caught my eye in your port.
Good luck to you and all my best.

Apr 27 11 04:17 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Cahoots Photography wrote:
Me too, please! I know I have a lot of work to do still.

This is the best in your porthttps://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110421/19/4db0e9307b4a9_m.jpg
nothing else strikes me as a special work or a specific concept you wanted to shoot. Most photos appear to be point and shoot in nature. Nothing staged or planned.
Nothing I can list at this time I am afraid. sad

Apr 27 11 04:23 pm Link

Photographer

Shawn Husseain

Posts: 131

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

varton wrote:

Immediately, Your best so far https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110327/11/4d8f7e37d0268_m.jpg listed.

I love this one too https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100617/09/4c1a47004e923_m.jpg listed

Good luck to you , great start

sweet, thanks! C:

Apr 27 11 04:30 pm Link

Model

DeannaJoyy

Posts: 241

San Francisco, California, US

I'd be interested.  Trying to improve my work. Thank you

Apr 27 11 04:47 pm Link

Model

llllllllllllllllllll

Posts: 612

Mamlyūtka, Soltüstik Ķazaķstan, Kazakhstan

Okay smile

Apr 27 11 04:49 pm Link

Model

-Michi-

Posts: 117

Seattle, Washington, US

varton wrote:
Bring it on everyone.

edit:
I will be working on your port in the order of entry, and will be processing ALL requests ASAP, please be patient and give me some time to look around your port. I don't want to rush to judgment and rubber stamp my replies with one size fits all approach.
Thank you for the opportunity given and check back here once in a while for latest topic status wink

Now at  page 15
keep them coming wink

I'm interested smile

Apr 27 11 05:02 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

maxwellstudios wrote:
i'm in smile

your port has all the right pictures
love this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110427/01/4db7d488f01c4_m.jpgand listed
gorgeous portrait work
drum roll : my fav and your best
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080904/02/48bf7d4e13b4e_m.jpg
good luck and all my best

Apr 27 11 05:32 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Christian Sennesvik wrote:
Could you look at mine to, please?

hi,
small port but to the point, like the portraits with the outstanding MUA job like this
is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110216/11/4d5c26d0c5e0a_m.jpg
and another great portrait https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/03/4daabd4058ad6_m.jpg
you should show more work and remove redundant looks.
keep it up, nice light contro you have here with great crops and poses

Apr 27 11 05:45 pm Link

Photographer

Rapier993 Photography

Posts: 191

Walled Lake, Michigan, US

varton wrote:
Keep clicking, fantastic job man. wink

Thank you!

Apr 27 11 05:52 pm Link

Photographer

Nathan Guadalupe

Posts: 319

Bogotá, Bogotá, Colombia

I'm game!

Apr 27 11 05:56 pm Link

Photographer

Nathan Guadalupe

Posts: 319

Bogotá, Bogotá, Colombia

I'm game!

Apr 27 11 05:57 pm Link

Photographer

Alien LiFe

Posts: 934

San Jose, California, US

If you still doing this ... I'm in ... smile

Thanks,

~alfie

Apr 27 11 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Alien LiFe

Posts: 934

San Jose, California, US

If you still doing this ... I'm in ... smile

Thanks,

~alfie

Apr 27 11 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

KC King wrote:
Curious, since I'm so all over the place.

I enjoyed visiting your port
you have beautiful nudes, creative horror shows as well :}
I love your editing as well.
Creative shot here https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101022/11/4cc1d7328ed49_m.jpg

This is my favorite https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110325/04/4d8c79a6050b4_m.jpg listed

Apr 27 11 06:05 pm Link

Model

Kiara Kelis

Posts: 36

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

I'm still building and have some waiting to go up, but I would love to know!

Apr 27 11 06:20 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

DeannaJoyy wrote:
I'd be interested.  Trying to improve my work. Thank you

Deanna, you have a lot of pics and those may be technically great shots but hey came accross as very similar except in rare occasions like this one https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110427/16/4db8a6551fcea_m.jpg Maybe it is just me.
The guitar shots  to me are pointless maybe because the way they are cropped or the way you are holding the instrument.
in this photo the dress is fabulous https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100429/10/4bd9c8fdcbd37_m.jpg but your hair appears as if you had two fingers sticking in the 120V AC outlet smile
love this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/16/4db756ef5ba67_m.jpg
You have a beautiful figure and
MY fav is this:https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100805/17/4c5b542d6d5a1_m.jpg listed

Apr 27 11 06:21 pm Link

Model

DeannaJoyy

Posts: 241

San Francisco, California, US

Thank you for the feedback. I just edited my port but thought maybe I needed to take more out and some of your comments will will help me do that.  I appreciate your time and comments smile

Apr 27 11 06:25 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

MartinKnorr wrote:
Okay smile

great job, perfect physique
you'll do well
I would shoot a harder crusty look in a junkyard
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110308/10/4d76758d201c6_m.jpg
myfav and your best below is listed
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110412/07/4da464891f79a_m.jpg
you can not go wrong with men at work theme.

Apr 27 11 06:30 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Michi Uyesugi wrote:
I'm interested smile

Here we go, you are pretty and if l had to shoot this leggy pose https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110402/19/4d97e09ec1fde_m.jpgI would ask you not to hide your right hand and balance yourself without touching the handrail and pose with smile.
I could not find any outstanding picture to list at this time. smile
all my best.

Apr 27 11 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Nathan Guadalupe wrote:
I'm game!

love the model’s pose on this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080830/22/48b9fbc92b5cb_m.jpgbut would prefer she posed on the floor and  naked feet for better impact.
I am noting that you have so many photos with anklets, leggings warmers and sports tights. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100625/15/4c252d07c9ff5_m.jpg
This is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100201/21/4b67b3017a88f_m.jpg listed.
Your photos are shot with beautiful models but the use of incompatible chairs and step ladder as  posing platform weakens your work.

Apr 27 11 07:01 pm Link

Photographer

Nathan Guadalupe

Posts: 319

Bogotá, Bogotá, Colombia

varton wrote:

love the model’s pose on this https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080830/22/48b9fbc92b5cb_m.jpgbut would prefer she posed on the floor and  naked feet for better impact.
I am noting that you have so many photos with anklets, leggings warmers and sports tights. https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100625/15/4c252d07c9ff5_m.jpg
This is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100201/21/4b67b3017a88f_m.jpg listed.
Your photos are shot with beautiful models but the use of incompatible chairs and step ladder as  posing platform weakens your work.

Thank you for your insight! Your input might help me think outside of the box a little bit more. smile

Apr 27 11 07:05 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Alien LiFe wrote:
If you still doing this ... I'm in ... smile

Thanks,

~alfie

You have a terrific black and white shooting style
and this illustrate it very well
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110423/00/4db27a9eee40d_m.jpg
my favorite, listed
keep clicking super job! wink

Apr 27 11 07:08 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Carley PD wrote:
I'm still building and have some waiting to go up, but I would love to know!

Carley,
I find you gorgeous but beauty is not enough. You need attitude and confidence in your poses.
Your body language sends out conflicting messages in this photo.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110104/11/4d2379b194190_m.jpg your hands are in the wrong spot, your stockings look short, and welts should be at least 5 inch higher. You seem uncomfortable in posing lingerie and you are clearly not excited smile
I love this one, which shows the best of you
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110228/20/4d6c773928ede_m.jpg
Listed

Apr 27 11 07:29 pm Link

Photographer

Cahoots Photography

Posts: 21

Portland, Oregon, US

Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

Apr 27 11 07:48 pm Link

Model

Stephanie Pearle

Posts: 43

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

I'm in smile

Apr 27 11 07:57 pm Link

Photographer

Nelia

Posts: 2166

San Francisco, California, US

Ok... I'll play.

Apr 27 11 08:05 pm Link

Model

_MIA

Posts: 988

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

varton wrote:
this is the  best in your port,https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090608/01/4a2cc9f8a2dc6_m.jpg I like the mysery in your smirk
I don't like the way it is chopped on top that's why I did not list it. Noting else caught my eye in your port.
Good luck to you and all my best.

Thanks so much for the compliment!!! It means a lot to me smile Good luck to you too!

Apr 27 11 08:50 pm Link

Model

ErinPaige

Posts: 85

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

hit me!

Apr 27 11 08:57 pm Link

Photographer

Christian Sennesvik

Posts: 47

Oslo, Oslo, Norway

varton wrote:

hi,
small port but to the point, like the portraits with the outstanding MUA job like this
is my fav https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110216/11/4d5c26d0c5e0a_m.jpg
and another great portrait https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/03/4daabd4058ad6_m.jpg
you should show more work and remove redundant looks.
keep it up, nice light contro you have here with great crops and poses

I planing on VIP, so I can add more, thanks so much smile

Apr 27 11 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Moodscapes

Posts: 422

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

... if you're still going - thanks.

Apr 27 11 09:13 pm Link

Model

Nicholas DeLisi

Posts: 5

Tampa, Florida, US

varton wrote:
This one was an eye catcher, quality shot with great contrast that shows well your muscles and beautiful 6 pack.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080824/00/48b0e308a3ad6_m.jpg
listed

Thank you for the list an your kind words! Hopefully I'll have some new pic to show off soon. I'll be back!

Apr 28 11 12:30 am Link