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Model

RoosBakker

Posts: 333

Ede, Gelderland, Netherlands

I'll play!

Apr 27 11 12:08 am Link

Makeup Artist

name changed by admin

Posts: 169

London, England, United Kingdom

Yes please smile

Apr 27 11 03:21 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Little Mousie wrote:
me too plz smile

OK Mousie smile I checked your port.
Your beauty is a jaw dropper.
Love your generous curves, and you are hot
especially on this one
This one is my fav listed
You may use perhaps more looks in your port as some of the photos are redundant.
You would do great as lifestyle pinup and lingerie model.

Apr 27 11 06:36 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

SKE Photography wrote:
I would like to know your thoughts.

You say in your port you do photography as a hobby and I must say you do it well. smile
Many gorgeous outdoor pics
It is time for you to get some soft boxes and try some indoor boudoirs
artistic portraits.
I love this one a lotlisted

Apr 27 11 06:40 am Link

Photographer

Maximilian Rivera

Posts: 396

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm down!!

Apr 27 11 06:50 am Link

Model

Tandy Lindsay

Posts: 125

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Would love to have your input! Thank you very much smile

Apr 27 11 07:05 am Link

Model

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez

Posts: 321

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Hey!

What about me? smile

Thanks!

Apr 27 11 07:53 am Link

Photographer

Rapier993 Photography

Posts: 191

Walled Lake, Michigan, US

Please! (and thank you.)

Apr 27 11 07:57 am Link

Model

Model Mouse

Posts: 111

Miami, Florida, US

varton wrote:

OK Mousie smile I checked your port.
Your beauty is a jaw dropper.
Love your generous curves, and you are hot
especially on this one
This one is my fav listed
You may use perhaps more looks in your port as some of the photos are redundant.
You would do great as lifestyle pinup and lingerie model.

big_smile thank u !!! yes im working on adding new looks .. muahz!! ty ur the best!

Apr 27 11 08:04 am Link

Model

Lenore Nevermore

Posts: 161

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Me please?

Apr 27 11 08:05 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

winking_wonder wrote:
And from mine?

Hi,
I find your look cute in some photos and hot in some others depending on how much you are revealing. You have to pay attention to your angles like you did in this one.

This is the best photo I like so far even if I find your smile overly complacent. Keep things simple. You need to cherry pick photographers that know what they are doing. Do not put any unedited ( a la naturale smile ) photos on your port. Wear padded bra when you photograph to enhance your figure to compensate for your thick waist, which is very obvious in some photos. Now pantyhosed beauty boudoir style is very sexy just the way you posed (I am being biased here I know wink )but a lot of things are missing here. You need a light scheme to create a mood. You have to control your face expression to make sure you mean "business" and you have to pick contrasting lingerie or clothing items to paint an attractive scene.

I am unable to list any photos at this time but, I know you can do better.
You should add corseted diva style looks to really show how you can be transformed from girl next door to a stunning hosed and heeled babe.
Keep it up. All my best.

Apr 27 11 08:28 am Link

Photographer

Bob Roth

Posts: 452

Rowland Heights, California, US

Too interesting a subject not to find out your opinion.

Apr 27 11 08:32 am Link

Photographer

coendeheer

Posts: 8

Dordrecht, Zuid-Holland, Netherlands

if you still have time... i'm in smile

Apr 27 11 08:36 am Link

Photographer

SNH Photography

Posts: 28

Los Angeles, California, US

I'll play...gulp! smile

Apr 27 11 08:36 am Link

Model

h-e-a-t-h-e-r

Posts: 29

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

thought i responded to this but can't find it so...i'd love to know smile

Apr 27 11 08:40 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

FotoMark wrote:
I'm interested.

You are a good thog with sense of humor

I listed this one already, love the vintage vibe.
THis one is my favorite.
Great job. You are flexible and know what you are doing wink

Apr 27 11 08:51 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

varton wrote:

Hi,
I find your look cute in some photos and hot in some others depending on how much you are revealing. You have to pay attention to your angles like you did in this one.

This is the best photo I like so far even if I find your smile overly complacent. Keep things simple. You need to cherry pick photographers that know what they are doing. Do not put any unedited ( a la naturale smile ) photos on your port. Wear padded bra when you photograph to enhance your figure to compensate for your thick waist, which is very obvious in some photos. Now pantyhosed beauty boudoir style is very sexy just the way you posed (I am being biased here I know wink )but a lot of things are missing here. You need a light scheme to create a mood. You have to control your face expression to make sure you mean "business" and you have to pick contrasting lingerie or clothing items to paint an attractive scene.

I am unable to list any photos at this time but, I know you can do better.
You should add corseted diva style looks to really show how you can be transformed from girl next door to a stunning hosed and heeled babe.
Keep it up. All my best.

Thank you so much for all your comments and advice!

Apr 27 11 08:54 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

h-e-a-t-h-e-r wrote:
thought i responded to this but can't find it so...i'd love to know smile

no I don't think I saw your reply to topic before
so let me get it out of the way now wink
You have a gorgeous look
My favorite picture is this listed.
Great style and eye contact.
Beautiful port. I would suggest that you add lingerie swimsuit and glamor shots to your port
L@@ks so far great!

Apr 27 11 08:57 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Nicholas DeLisi wrote:
My port is young yet, but I'd live to know.

This one was an eye catcher, quality shot with great contrast that shows well your muscles and beautiful 6 pack.

listed

Apr 27 11 08:59 am Link

Model

Nori Zay

Posts: 12279

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Me?

Apr 27 11 09:03 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez wrote:
Hey!

What about me? smile

Thanks!

I replied few pages ago wink
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15240448

Apr 27 11 09:04 am Link

Model

Tifanie Covington

Posts: 242

Dallas, Texas, US

mee tooooo smile

Apr 27 11 09:07 am Link

Model

Heather LoveJoy

Posts: 29

Columbus, Ohio, US

hit me with it baby!

Apr 27 11 09:14 am Link

Model

h-e-a-t-h-e-r

Posts: 29

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

Thanks!!

Apr 27 11 09:53 am Link

Model

Jouella

Posts: 1

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'd like to know smile

Apr 27 11 10:00 am Link

Photographer

Shawn Husseain

Posts: 131

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

what fun!

Apr 27 11 10:00 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Marlinde wrote:
I'll play!

Marlinde, you are beautiful but you appear very pale in photos.
I would add some more looks especially colorful fashion, urban and lifestyle shots
that would look great with your blonde hair and gorgeous figure. All your poses are done with white outfits except 1 and that's listed.
love your hair and posture here
Keep it up you are stunning

Apr 27 11 10:32 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Rachel Louise Jones wrote:
Yes please smile

Rachel
your port is exactly what I like to see, colors style and attitude!
WOW
great job
I listed the one below, my fav.
that's what happens when you work with pros wink
drop dead gorgeous!
In this one I am not so much crazy about the pose but the outfit and make up is very original and appealing.

Apr 27 11 10:39 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Maximilian Studios wrote:
I'm down!!

Max, I love your outdoor, on location shoots.
I would add some studio shots for completness
My congrats for this onelisted, I loved it!
This one is a masterpiece, in light and pose, listed.
and this is so good and fun
Keep clicking, terrific job.

Apr 27 11 10:52 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Tandy Lindsay wrote:
Would love to have your input! Thank you very much smile

Tandy you need to find a good photographer like yesterday! smile
get rid of everything else except those here below
My Fav listed great nice colors

You are beautiful but the port really need a fresh coat of paint and more.
wink keep it up.

Apr 27 11 10:59 am Link

Photographer

punkuate

Posts: 1558

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

Please!

Apr 27 11 11:03 am Link

Model

_MIA

Posts: 988

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Me too?

Apr 27 11 11:04 am Link

Photographer

Cahoots Photography

Posts: 21

Portland, Oregon, US

Me too, please! I know I have a lot of work to do still.

Apr 27 11 11:09 am Link

Photographer

maxwellstudios

Posts: 651

Loma Linda, California, US

i'm in

Apr 27 11 11:23 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Russ Turner Photography wrote:
Please! (and thank you.)

Russ you are excellent, I am happy you shot some real nylons here,
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22417618
but I really dislike the nipple covers, I don't care how cute they are they mess up the photo and your message. I rather have you see shot her with a blouse on.
Anyway I know I am very sensitive to those things and maybe I shouldn't be big_smile
Let's go on.
this makes me wow
I always loved steampunk and bizarre shots but never did it because I have no market for it. Love it it was a crime to cut off at the thighs - listed
This is your best and I mean it, and listed.
You have few photos that really you don't need in your port as do not add much. Your work speaks for itself
Keep clicking, fantastic job man. wink

Apr 27 11 11:46 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Lenore Nevermore wrote:
Me please?

Oh Lenore Lenore smile smile
I am speechless
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22705692 listed +18
great oh la la pose love it but I would rather see you skip the fishnets in this one unless you want to reflect the folies bergere show girl look smile smile
In this one below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22705837 +18

your pose in conjunction with lighting gives great mood but makes you look pear shape smile
in this one I don't like your eye contact photography is supposed to be fun and the way you hold the camera suggest you weren't coached well for this pose smile
Some other bw photos you have got are a bit too light for my taste.
You may do some spring cleanup and add more looks to your port.
All my best to you.

Apr 27 11 12:05 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Bob Roth wrote:
Too interesting a subject not to find out your opinion.

This one strikes me as your best it is picturesque and almost like an oil painting.
I like this model a lot I will give out cookies as a prize if anyone can tell me why big_smile
I love your sun sets https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22106767 +18 listed
Love this listed. It is a nice pinup,
it complies with the golden rule my mentor thought me 30 years ago:
"If it can give a smile and a hard on at the same time, you did it son!"
I love your port, keep clicking.

Apr 27 11 12:22 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

coendeheer wrote:
if you still have time... i'm in smile

Well well
You nailed this one on the head;) listed
You have great potential , You have some dramatic lighting and flat lighting overall in studio portrait work There is no harm to add outdoor shots to show your flexibility other then boring seamless paper portraits. Capture beauty where they live, in the nature wink

Apr 27 11 12:33 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

SNH Photography wrote:
I'll play...gulp! smile

big_smile
ok I will be gentle
wait, I love what you got.
here we go listed
LOL listed
NOPE black fishnets makes her look cheap. To contrast with the boot and burgundy chair you should have used light pink or off white nylons, preferably patterned lace.
This one has nice post processing and high contrast, love it

Apr 27 11 12:43 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2768

New York, New York, US

Nori Zay wrote:
Me?

Nori, you look super,
This one is listed
and I love this as well as concept but not the pose,
This is a good seller for jobs listed
Gorgeous job
Excellent posing and outfit here
Kudos to all involved, love your port.

Apr 27 11 12:50 pm Link

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