Timothy Bell wrote:
interested in your thoughts

First impressions: Excellent work, fine pinups (I am biased)
Your Skill level: great savoir faire
Your creativity:  is remarkable
Specific  style: pinups vintage beauty
Your Work focus: artistic vintage and fashion
Your challenges: your photos are well composed but on some concepts it lacks the zing, try to add more humor and subtlety..
Your MM Profile usefulness: basic to the point unpretentious unlike many.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: she is awesome
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great balanced port that show all your skills, great hi key and low key shots, awesome refined pinups, will revisit often.
Do you make my list?: of course

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
OK, I guess it is time to take the "plunge".  Fire away!

OK mostly +18 port so all links mentioned are +18

First impressions: your work is mostly glamor and art nudes and well done but they don't do much for me as I find art nudes boring. Photographers on mayhem rarely can break out of the generic styles and make me want to give a second look at their work. It's like listening to rock. Rock is rock , hip hop is hip hop so I really don't care about this style.
Your Skill level: good for the style
Your creativity:  avoid GWC mode trying to invent a style e.g. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35693938 delete
Specific  style: colored gels are a bit tacky stay away in art nudes e.g. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19130189 delete
Your Work focus: tits and butts
Your challenges: running out of ideas? fishnets garter belts and sneakers combination  gives me  a major shock here  from which I can't recover. but again I am old school and conformist.
Your MM Profile usefulness: people will get the idea.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39583449
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: take a hard look at your work. you have good story lines, and some nice compositions, the trouble is that they fall short of convincing the trained eyes looking at your images. some of the nudes lack beauty and life and look like objects rather then subjects. Overall your lighting is in the ball park. I find  more people sometime taking best photos  with the worst lighting in my reviews , so go figure..
Do you make my list?: no

KaleidoscopePhotography wrote:
Hello there,
I'm interested in your opinion!
thanks

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First impressions: port gives me a feel of film shooter, noticed some interesting concepts, flawed approaches but seem like conclusive nice work.
Your Skill level: beginner
Your creativity:  unconventional
Specific  style: multi : artistic journalistic
Your Work focus: lifestyle
Your challenges: shooting such a way your photos become a product people would want to buy.
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: maybe
What I like:  I like the slanted angles, great use of location
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: improve composition, think before you click I would shift the girl more to the left so she is distinct from the tree on right. Great catch.
Do you make my list?: no

Eric J  Johnson wrote:
I'm just returning to model photography after a number of years away, and my skill, whatever I had, has stagnated.  Will you please give me a much needed critical jolt?

First impressions: simple unpretentious research
Your Skill level: basic
Your creativity:  trial and error style mostly model driven
Specific  style: can be developed with use of your instincts.
Your Work focus: random
Your challenges: lens deformation and use of tilted angles fails you totally.
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: no
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your crops are flawed and ruins otherwise a good concept. in portraiture always keep in mind lens aberration, make sure heads don't look abnormally bigger then body. exotic angles will ruin the shot. 
Do you make my list?: no

Roberto De Micheli wrote:
Me too please

First impressions: I only have compliments
Your Skill level: advanced
Your creativity:  at time gives the feel like influenced by others work
Specific  style: editorial / portfolio
Your Work focus: fashion editorial high fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful and to the point
Your challenges: better control on model's best angles e.g. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40907686 bad crop (never crop on extremities) meh look bad wardrobe selection
the other shoe is not showing (little things make big impressions)
shoes shoes where are they

Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like:  I like the motion and look, shame hair covers half her face.
bad crop bottom part of dress details are missing
I am not sure if I like the added noise/specs in post work

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: very good work, Great locations and parcour shoots. it will be perfect if you avoid some caveats like environmental obstructions, better natural light blended with artificial light, better contrast and control over model poses.
avoid models that give you consistently deer in the headlights poses
the shady and sun cast portion of the photo really cancel the desirability of this shot.
I would probably line up the shortest girl from left  middle in the middle and  the taller to the right in order to create an additional perspective to the photo from the provided angle.
. I find the people sitting on grass as a distraction.

Do you make my list?:   yes
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varton wrote:

First impressions: I only have compliments
Your Skill level: advanced
Your creativity:  at time gives the feel like influenced by others work
Specific  style: editorial / portfolio
Your Work focus: fashion editorial high fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful and to the point
Your challenges: better control on model's best angles e.g. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40907686 bad crop (never crop on extremities) meh look bad wardrobe selection

Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:

Thank you
I appreciate the comments.

I freely admit that I do get bad tunnel vision when I shoot and I often miss some details. I would probably benefit from shooting tethered and having someone checking the images on a screen to correct such issues. Of course this being a hobby for me, it may never happen
Having said that, I do also try to experiment with different angles and compositions... sometimes it works out great sometimes it doesn't

And yes sometimes models / styling are not up to what I would like to, but again, I can't always afford what I want

thesleepycat wrote:
what do you think?

First impressions: Versatile and beautiful
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: flexible from art nudes to fashion
Your Work focus: varied but you can do better in casual fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: missing assertion and attitude in sexy poses, sometime your poses seem awkward or neutral. Camera connection is not consistent. some nudes are either too boring or not flattering.
Paid assignments: definitely yes
What to delete:  too many photos showing same styles and demeanor
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Practice your poses in front of a tall mirror, shift poses just like they do Kata in Karate, memorize them. check your posture and don't have your lips semi open all the time for fashion shoots, they are better suited for boudoir glamors.
You can be a great muse to a photographer, I can tell you like to experiment.
Do you make my list?: yes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41215292      +18

Nina x wrote:
Would love to know!

Thank you,

Nina

First impressions: Noticed that you never smile and in some photos either pain or grief is communicated, lighten up you are beautiful
Your Skill level: Basic
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: some creative expressions noted
Your Work focus: not necessarily focused on a genre
Your MM Profile usefulness: not much
Your challenges: same look and some cramped poses.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: see below listed
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your port is to vanilla, no choc factor.
Do you make my list?: yes

ChaceWolfe wrote:
I would love to know what you think! Thank you very much!

First impressions: some experience, looks and skills noted
Specific  style: any
Your Work focus: can't tell from your port
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: your port doesn't represent your modeling goals
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: 
What to delete:  I don't know why those are even in your port
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41115274
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40794688
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40794686
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41115222
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40794742
they won't get you hired
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your port is not focused well to reflect a modeling specialty to make yourself stand out from the crowd.. If you don't focus your work you will lose jobs to your competition.
Do you make my list?: no

HNL99 wrote:
Would love to know! 😊 Thanks so much! H

First impressions: Great look
Your Skill level: beginner
Your MM Profile usefulness: basic
Your challenges: Although providing good camera connection need to pose better
Paid assignments: TFP
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Need to work on your modeling harder.
Do you make my list?: no

varton wrote:
First impressions: Noticed that you never smile and in some photos either pain or grief is communicated, lighten up you are beautiful
Your Skill level: Basic
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: some creative expressions noted
Your Work focus: not necessarily focused on a genre
Your MM Profile usefulness: not much
Your challenges: same look and some cramped poses.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: see below listed
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your port is to vanilla, no choc factor.
Do you make my list?: yes

Thanks so much for your input!
I added a smiling picture. )

Nina

S-U-B-L-I-M-E wrote:
Certainly would like to hear. Enjoyed looking at your work!

well thank you my current profile is probably very boring, check 779176 instead
Ok so I also enjoyed your work, really top shelf fetish!
First impressions: Nothing but my compliments
Your Skill level: Advanced in all areas
Your creativity:  Fetishy however it would have been better if the teddy was facing us.
Specific  style: Artistic fetish with erotic slants (like mine)
Your Work focus: Fetish glamor /fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: people get the idea
Your challenges: I wish you had other props like " dentist's chair"  and combine latex and nylons
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5928927 +18
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8966708 right on the spot
What to delete:  none
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great work and room for more there, some irl girl posing are not as intense as it looks upon close inspection
in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11929813 +13 poses and expressions are meh, you should direct the action better.
In this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7664611 +18 the "shave" is barely noticeable on a quick glance, props used should be more visible and not blend with anything else.
In this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8493156 +18 fishnets look cheap, you should swap the hosiery used in this photo https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/6349178
But
overall s-u-b-l-i-m-e work!
Do you make my list?: yes

Adriano Sollazzo wrote:
I really would love your review please

First impressions: a plain port focused mostly beauty and portraiture
Your Skill level: aspired photographer
Your creativity:  model driven
Specific  style: still searching, nothing edgy
Your Work focus: portraiture
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: This may or may not be important to you but I think you should try to get rid of shadow casts in outdoor shoots where light is uneven and some areas on the face exposes more then other parts. (see shadow cast on legs https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40814958 +18 )
and are some examples.
Another thing to avoid is uneven background when using shallow depth of field.  In this you lack dynamic range and the blur makes the background even worst. Colorful busy background will create an outstanding bouket like this and I like it very much.
unless really wanted avoid  obstructions in front of the subject as it can create awkward tints  watch  the hair. it gives a feeling of a cut/injury on the side of the face in this photo.
Paid assignments: maybe
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/40814960 +18
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: watch outside natural lighting, use reflectors avoid shadow casts on unwanted areas.
Do you make my list?: no

Its All Light wrote:
hit me up

First impressions: thinking out of the box, not much grabs me though.
Your Skill level: aspiring
Specific  style: rebellious?
Your Work focus:
Your MM Profile usefulness: pompously useless Let me add another one to your list. Jacking up the saturation hue and contrast doesn't make it art either.
Your challenges: expressions and actions in your photos barely communicate what you are trying to create and lacks intensity
Paid assignments: maybe

What I like: 

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I can't elaborate much, you are capturing  interesting concepts and subjects but it doesn't do much for me. there is nothing in your port that makes me to look at it again. Some BW work is good but if there is any retouch at all appears sometime overdone or under done.
in this hard light becomes a major flaw.
Do you make my list?: no

idamayer wrote:
I'd love some feedback

First impressions: Beautiful athletic lady with some proven skills and needs some help to improve her poses
Your Skill level: You need to shoot more
Your Work focus: fitness, but can do commercial
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: face expressions are dull and mostly same from photo to photo
Paid assignments: maybe
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: experiment posing in front of a tall mirror. diversify your port and perhaps add fitness training and product promotion commercial style photos.
Do you make my list?: no