Petr Hingar wrote:
Would very much appreciate your feedback. 😀

and also...more I have on my web page 😀 so, feel free to visit

Regards,
Petr

Following based only from MM profile:
First impressions: Nice work creative concepts appealing visuals
Your Skill level: advanced
Your creativity:  noticed
Specific  style: glamor beauty-naughty
Your Work focus: variety without being stuck on a style
Your MM Profile usefulness: works for me
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  none
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Keep up the great work , compliments.
Do you make my list?: yes

Jon Martin wrote:
I want to say thanks for your review you have done on my port before.  I take all criticism to heart in a good and learning way cause I always want to improve.  I've redone some of my port now and was hoping to get another honest review by you, I'd really appreciate it

based on new port:

First impressions: tasteful nudes, good color saturation in photos
Your Skill level: model driven, some indoor lighting need to be improved,
Your creativity: 
Specific  style: candid
Your Work focus: beauty
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: boots don't go well with the mood of this shot,
I am old school and find tattoos a bit distracting and incompatible in this .
harsh shadows ruin otherwise nice poses in lingerie
Paid assignments: eventually
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Use softboxe monolights to shoot lingerie boudoirs, speedlights with diffusers usually give poor results, work on better model posing.
Do you make my list?: no

Nasreeny wrote:
Please review my profile. I will be grateful.

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Meghan Congdon wrote:
Please give me your feedback. Much appreciated!

First impressions: hobbyist model
Your Skill level: average
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Your Work focus: fashion/beauty
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: some poses are too synthetic
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  you are not in best light in this, sepia doesn't work for me.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: A weak port for a model who has a lot of potential, work more with different photographers and pay if necessary for better photos. work on your poses as well.
Do you make my list?: no

MelissaTai wrote:
Hi Varton,
I guess you are like the Godfather of MM, because everyone wants to come under your judging review. Very Nice ! .... Of Course Me Too . I have just a few photos so far but would appreciate your thoughts.

Thank you have a great 2017

Thanks for your kind words.

all links +18
First impressions: hobbyist level artistic nude port
Your Skill level: beginner
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Your Work focus: art, boudoirs
Your MM Profile usefulness: sounds impressive.
Your challenges: running out of viable poses, for instance I counted 8 photos single or both elbows high holding your hair/head like this
Paid assignments: yes for nudes
Your money shot: could be https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41949058 you guy's should remove from the field of view that ugly coat laying on the sand
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41738466
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41949054 not useful nor flattering, you have better.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I didn't critique photo quality as they are photographer's responsibility, so, work on your craft and poses and dress to impress, be more sophisticated and more demanding on the options for wardrobe and lingerie.
Do you make my list?: no

Christina Banick wrote:
I'd love to hear your thoughts, when you have the time.

First impressions: *CURRENTLY ON HIATUS* noted
Your Skill level: some experience
Specific  style: commercial and fashion more then anything else
Your Work focus: best suited for commercial and character themes.
Your MM Profile usefulness: honest and genuine
Your challenges: work harder and know your angles, especially, if the photographer has no clue about them.
Paid assignments: possible
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  avoid big  smiles.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict:    avoid poses like this -->
sexy factor is missing , I know you can do better. Your photos are cropped badly.
Do you make my list?: no

Eleanor Rose wrote:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback!

First impressions: A port worthy of anyone's time, gorgeous look, with adaptability factor.
Your Skill level: Very experienced
Specific  style: a Variety
Your Work focus: erotic art bondage and glamor
Your MM Profile usefulness: very specific and informative
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep up the good work
Do you make my list?: yes

jessica wolff wrote:
OOH please do me next!!!

First impressions: sexy look
Your Skill level: advanced
Specific  style: erotic vibes
Your Work focus: beauty
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Paid assignments: yes
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: It would be helpful to add a clear portrait.
Do you make my list?: yes

Red Baron Photography wrote:
me too, please:)...!

First impressions: pleasant and balanced portfolio from nice to mostly naughty
Your Skill level: good all around
Your creativity:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30025579 +18
Specific  style: I can tell from model gazes you are fun to work with.
Your Work focus: a Variety of interests are noted
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: meh concepts in your bare curves album
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your watermarks are distracting. too many photos of same model and looks in your port is not necessarily  good. I would prefer your nudes in BW
Do you make my list?: no

Shutterjunkie wrote:
I would be interested in learning your views of my work. Thank you in advance. Respectfully, Gregor Alan

First impressions: generally top shelf work. Some background manipulations and colors  appear unrealistic
Your Skill level: advanced
Your creativity:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41525741
Specific  style: artistic
Your Work focus: beauty and nature
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: I am afraid without photoshop you will be helpless.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: great imagery, some surrealist but mostly appear tacky or at best fake. It is a caveat and you shouldn't fall in it. beware, your audience will have eventually enough and leave.
Do you make my list?: yes

PrinceTheModel wrote:
Hi, can you check out my port

First impressions: good beginnings
Your Skill level: amateur
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41748005
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41748000
lose the pics with the flower
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41699311 useless for your port
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: add concept driven photos that are more focused to real life work like fitness, commercial etc.
Do you make my list?: no

Lawrence Young  wrote:
same here

First impressions: Beginner
Your Skill level: Amateur
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: attention to detail, before clicking check the model so everything is properly composed
see the jacket problem? ->
Paid assignments: no
Your money shot:
What I like: 
good light flawed tint
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your photos appear a bit over saturated, very tight crops won't add to the drama you are seeking.
Do you make my list?: no

Tarikwilkes wrote:
I would appreciate a critique.

First impressions: good "personality" shots
Your Skill level: beginner
Your Work focus:   fashion fitness will work
Your MM Profile usefulness: acceptable as a minimum
Your challenges: posing and convincing you are a model, in male modeling looking down doesn't create drama or romantic mood it indicates weakness, google up for male poses.
Paid assignments: nope
Your money shot:
What I like:  but your gaze to camera is flawed, looking to uptight, relax a bit. Avoid to be in vignetting pics.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep the fitness shots, replace everything else with some fancy clothing and shoot in some interesting locations. You will do well in boy girl duo shoots for commercials.
Do you make my list?:

Amy DeBellis wrote:
Would like your opinion on mine please!

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Python Photos wrote:
I'm impressed by all that you've done. If you'd like to add another, please consider my portfolio.

First impressions: variety ranged from beauty to the beast
Your Skill level: model driven
Your Work focus: a variety
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful but at the limit of tedious.
Your challenges: I didn't care about zombie shots, in my case they rather make me laugh then scaring.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:  great use of location
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: <- pitfall, your tight crop just show a girl with a knife, and the story just ends there. You need more then the naughty gaze there to tell a story. This is the case also in some other photos.
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26570292 model looks cheap in that  lingerie
Do you make my list?: no

Jay Dee-Foto wrote:
i'll bite

First impressions: good work but some issues with retouch
Your Work focus: fashion and beauty
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: your best listed

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I haven't been able to assess   actual  photographer skills in your port as images are overwritten with some  heavy duty photoshop work that sometime falls back in unexpected areas such as artifacts on her forehead neck shoulders  (brown khaki) probably due to excessive application of successive multiple contrast and saturation which is visible on my monitor e.g. alteration of background color is also evident as her hair extremities head contour also doesn't look natural, as if it was wiped out using smudge tool.

same in bottom of photo (dull brown khaki color spots on shoulders)   and after all that hard work I wouldn't want the hair on arms either.
Do you make my list?:   yes

Isriah wrote:
?

double dipped see here
https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post … st19516767
First impressions: great look and versatility
Your Skill level: very experienced
Your Work focus: multi from gore to pinups
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great job, compliments
Do you make my list?: no

Ed Wins wrote:
I'd love to hear feedback. Many thanks!

double dipped
https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post … st19677661

Pivot Photography wrote:
Hi Varton,

Would love your feedback if you could.

Thank you

First impressions: nice job a good start
Your Work focus: not defined in the port
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: composition: think purpose goal and style before clicking
Paid assignments: no
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: for indoor photography use a light diffuser to avoid harsh shadows -> better model pose management avoid goofy looks.
Do you make my list?: no

Johnny Juarez wrote:
Would love feedback

First impressions: nice portrait work
Your Skill level: good
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: not much happening in your port, just like still water
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: 
What to delete:  model doesn't look good and bad crop, flat light
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Unfortunately  your port falls in the category where I would  forget in 10 minutes after my visit. your work is redundant and tedious for my taste. I'll visit again after you add some interesting concepts.
Do you make my list?: no

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
You did me last in 2013. Want to take another look?


Best,

Jorge

Sure
I was busy for a while but I am continuing always this thread as my time permits.

CThomas Photography wrote:
I would love feedback as well. Thank you so much!

First impressions: Nice BW work, good tones. Great port, focused on male beauty.
Your Skill level: advanced
Your Work focus: tasty nudes
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: it is hard not to reinvent the wheel in the nudes rubrique
Paid assignments: hell yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  although valid for a female model, this pose is perceived by me as tacky
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are a good shot, and you shouldn't limit yourself only on masculin subjects.
Do you make my list?: yes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41439110

Tiina K wrote:
Me

First impressions: excellent well balanced port for a model shooting fashion, glamour, nude, and erotica.
Your Skill level: good posing skills
Your creativity:  can lead photographers
Specific  style: art erotica fashion
Your Work focus: is leaning on alternative moods
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: Always be mindful of your posture for fashion shots, tattoos may not be compatible with all genre of work.
Paid assignments: hell yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42615781 has no business in your port
excessive and looks crippled pose
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are doing great, keep shooting ! Remove the redundant pics where you pose in he same outfit at the same location. Your art nude poses are pretty much within the standard. The glamor and erotic nudes need more presence. The issue is lack of directing, not you.
Do you make my list?: No