Julie Ann NYC wrote:
Sure!

First impressions: Port is very weak for commercial and fashion work
Your Skill level: From the poses I would say average
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: Plus size commercial modeling
Your Work focus: show more lingerie / glamour in the port
Your MM Profile usefulness: very useful and professional
Your challenges: redo some of the bedroom glamour curves alone are not enough to create "a visual desirability" impact
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42116873
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You should emphasize more on fashion, commercial  and artistic work. Your port photos gives "amateur" impression.
Do you make my list?: NO

varton wrote:

Ok Gary, your work is so very good
and so much to see
few notes;
excessive use of wide lens, deforming faces
excessive use of cropping on certain photos that makes me feel as if I was leaving the dinner table hungry
reckless use of high heels even on incompatible wardrobe
but hey it looks great anyway, so this is
another hard portfolio to pick from but hey, I did it!
love this one

but added to my list the one below.

great job keep clicking man, looks super.

Awwwww thanks... I've added several new pics over the last 6 months... feel free to swing by again...

David Introligator wrote:
OK, I join the fray
I'm a begginer, but feedback and improvement clues are always welcome...
Thanks !

First impressions: Bonjour, some nice shots and interesting shots with celebs.
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your creativity:  static but enigmatic
Specific  style: life as it happens
Your Work focus: artistry, stage photography
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: composition feels as an afterthought
Paid assignments: no
What I like:    great capture
What to delete:  odd ball crops don't augment the value of the shot  and don't not always add or convey the drama you perceive
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep it up, avoid very tight crops, improve your story telling, diversify genres because visitors might not remember who you are and your work and port past their visit. Read a lot shoot a lot.
Do you make my list?: yes

JsNo1x wrote:
Critique away! 💋

Very avant garde and in a genre where I may not be very objective to critique your work.
But will try.
First impressions: +18 Adult genre
Specific  style: Alternative in combination with gender bender and fetishes
Your Work focus: to your face and taboo busting
Your MM Profile usefulness: everyone will get the idea with or without.
Your challenges: I recommend to add some sophistication factor in your modeling and wardrobe to meet and exceed the lifestyle you are catering to and  to distinguish yourself from the bunch in a very crowded market.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: 
What to delete:  any photo where you have the same wasted face expressions shot in the same location as being redundant. Focus more on what sells if you want to get hired.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your look and posture will attract some known niche markets
Do you make my list?: nope

Herman van Gestel wrote:
ai.....very impressive....respect!!

in any case...let me know (even if my portfolio has not been updated for 6 years)

Herman

First impressions: Excellent port, excellent all over.
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your creativity:  Very creative
Specific  style: Most but you shine in pinups
Your Work focus: Pinup Fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful
Your challenges: overly photoshopped images reflects retoucher talent , this one is borderline
I find on this the lighting "manufactured" via retouch and skin textures are suffering.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21915742
What to delete: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Keep up the excellent work
Do you make my list?: yes

Massi wrote:
Wow, epic thread! I'm up for a review

First impressions: Romantic approach and very sweet visuals
Your Skill level: Good shot
Your creativity: 
Specific  style: Bridal also a bit eclectic
Your Work focus: beauty and life
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: overlooking some minor details where e.g. toes and foot looks unflattering or awkward. here another one ->  would be better to either hide feet or fully show them.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: although don't like pale or overly post processed skins/faces
What I like: 
What to delete: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You take good advantage of some unique shoot locations, overall beautiful fashion statement. I liked what I see. Better directing model expression is a must  -> miss 

Do you make my list?: yes 

Aseeyah Sun wrote:
I would like to hear, thanks :-)

First impressions: flexible work and natural look
Your Skill level: above average
Your creativity: photographer driven
Specific  style: versatile
Your Work focus: diverse
Your MM Profile usefulness: minimal to the point
Your challenges: lack of originality in concepts shot
Paid assignments: yes for nudes
What I like: I prefer in general your clothed shots versus nudes/erotic nudes
What to delete: I saw a long list of unflattering photos in nude work.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: some of your pics need polishing. I see good attitude and perseverance but in some cases photographers can fail you if they don't pay attention to details. Concepts look for most part duplication of artificial and synthesized topics.
Do you make my list?: no

Ali Choudhry Photo wrote:
Yes please.

First impressions: minimal clean and good traditional style work
Your Skill level: above average, good work
Your creativity: risk to be shadowed by trends
Specific  style: flexible
Your Work focus: artistic portraiture
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: subjects you photograph have limited expansion
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot:
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: good job overall.
Do you make my list?: no

aasim wrote:
https://500px.com/apnaasim

First impressions: Very good photography
Your Skill level: Good
Your creativity: on the spot
Specific  style: glamour
Your Work focus: portraiture
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: Drifting perhaps between naughty and nice, regardless good job.
Paid assignments: hell yes
Your money shot:
What I like:
What to delete: you have stronger pics.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: good lighting and good composition.
Do you make my list?: No

Joannee wrote:
can you critique me please

First impressions: Gorgeous smile. Cute look, too many pics in the same sexy attire.
Your Skill level: extensive skill set
Your creativity: inspiring to most photographers
Specific  style: divers, from commercial to pinup tease
Your Work focus:   should be more fashion although you can pull off anything with the right photographer
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: Bring a better focus to your portfolio, you have a tough competition.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: see below listed
What I like:
What to delete: bad photoshop, + all the corset pics except this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44836385 lighting is meh, location is meh and unattached garters and lacetops look cheap. be more demanding on photographer's skill set.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You look great and should focus more on commercial style.
Do you make my list?: yes strongest in your port.

Jack Saul Photography wrote:
Sure, fire away (18+ portfolio)

First impressions: totally naked guys (nothing wrong with it)
Your Skill level: basic snapshot level
Your creativity: can't see
Specific  style: adult
Your MM Profile usefulness: your work speaks by itself, no need for.
Your challenges: composition, visual appeal
Paid assignments: none
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are using speed lite with no diffusers and I for one doesn't like hard cast shadows
Do you make my list?: probably never.

Miss CBlack wrote:
Hi Varton, I appreciate the service you provide so many people and would love to hear input you have regarding my portfolio. Thank you in advance! Crista

First impressions: Amazing camera connection
Your Skill level: comfortable both pose and nudity
Your creativity: You can be an inspiring muse
Specific  style: glamor fashion lifestyle
Your Work focus: should be more shift to pinups which is not done correctly as 3/4 turn poses are preferred to show  the outfits better.
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point but no one will care really
Your challenges: Pinups are posed as boudoirs. The rest is fine.
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: and this which is the best in your port
What I like: but could be posed with a better body language and face expression, in this photo you look like you have to go to the bathroom also your nylons are the story and thy don't show well. Replace it if you have another better pose in this set.
What to delete:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Good work!
Do you make my list?: Yes

Jamiejameskovac wrote:
Do me!

Do Me Please!
Interesting look.
Effortless posing
Good model for trends and commercial work
You'll do well in tough guy chapter.

Double Exposure Tog wrote:
I'd like you critique on my Double Exposures if you have time.
Thanks!

First impressions: Double exposure
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your creativity: very creative
Specific  style: double exposure
Your Work focus: art
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: some compositions suggest you are running out of ideas.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:
What to delete: Buildings over heads don't work well IMHO
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your work is appealing, a good eye candy.
Do you make my list?: yes

BCS Glamour Photography wrote:
Mine, please?

First impressions: big collection of diverse imagery
Your Skill level: intermediate
Specific  style: diverse
Your Work focus: Glamour of course
Your MM Profile usefulness: tediously long.
Your challenges: indoor lighting creates glows on model heads. try better light modifiers white clothing on white background requires a lot more work and techniques. In your case avoid or get better before showcasing it.
Paid assignments: TFP
Your money shot:
What I like:
What to delete: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … d675_m.jpg redundant you have better
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Some cheesecake pinups could be better cropped or framed. Fitness photography style is not matured well. good use of light and shadows https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 0062_m.jpg I would totally get rid of your nudes in your member section of port, light and posing and composition lacks.
Do you make my list?: no

ILPhoto wrote:
Sure - take a look!

Excellent BW work, good lighting and compositions for the most part. Keep it up.

Pat Wilson Photography wrote:
Sure!

Great work, good light and composition on the spot, sensual and tasteful concepts. Keep up the good work.

Tyler A Photography wrote:
I would like mine done please

I like your low keys, You are able to create dynamic pictures. Great money shot
Your outdoor work doesn't grab me much.

3RD-i wrote:
Oh, yes please.

Very good work, we get the sense of a work of a filmmaker here. Colorful, well composed imagery.
My favs: reminding me pulp fiction noir

is a masterpiece
listed
Super job!

Cynthia Star wrote:
Me please

First impressions:   beautiful, addictive gorgeous.
Your Work focus: glamor commercial
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: good camera connection, but some poses need to be worked on as they feel artificial or uncomfortable.
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I feel that you are your best when you are really motivated
Do you make my list?: no

Eros Fine Art Photo wrote:
Wow!  I'm absolutely impressed by your dedication and consistency to this thread.  Kudos.

I'd be glad to hear what you think.

Great artistic skills, and use of light and shadows duly noted. Value of your work would benefit a lot more if less erotic.
My favs:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26235152
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26235136

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16586537 your best
Keep up the good work.

LT da Producer wrote:
Hello, I'm new to MM i have no clue on how to search these forums I just picked a  few topics that closely matches with what I am looking for so please excuse me. I just want feedback on some of the work i've shot please and thank you. I am looking to expand and grow with my skills and talents and work with more people and businesses in other states. please feel free to contact me or DM me I am available... thanks

You are doing fantastic
Very good portrait work, nothing sugar coated nor overdone, right on the spot
but a word of caution flower covers the mouth and looks a bit unnatural, unimportant looking little details can fail you otherwise.
listed

Vito wrote:
Why Yes please. I dare you to find a good photo

Hmm
I concur, on the other hand your reckless clicking creates a genre of its own.
your Ashley Graham pics looks as spontaneously combustive avant garde.

Keep shooting as long as you are having fun.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38722354 listed

Noir Boudoir NorCal wrote:
I'm in...  tell me what you think.

I like the bw work in general, hi contrast photos are always attractive, and soothing to the eye no matter what the content or concept is. I like your noir boudoir and the way you focus on female beauty and your visuals are compelling, stopping a bit short of "art" but who cares. Some cropping right below the waist line looks bad.
What bothers me is that these beautiful creatures shouldn't be photographed just in hotel rooms.
They have so much to offer but that falls off from your focal point.
My favs in your port:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42745257

bad leg crop
you can do better!
Good work!

GSG Photography Studio wrote:
PLEASE!

Magazine quality work, nothing much to say other then you have an eye for beauty.
Money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44764571
least desirable in your port https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44357969
listed

Organized_Mayhem wrote:
I'm still a beginner/amateur but please review my portfolio.

First impressions: Amateur photographer
Your Skill level: basic
Your challenges: framing cropping
the tree shouldn't look as if it was stemming from her head
awkward crops at chest
bad background framing around model's mouth
cars are a distraction on otherwise nice shot
Paid assignments: no

What I like:
Do you make my list?: no
like carpenters, photographers must measure 3 times and cut once.

Vince_Falconer wrote:
Let me have it!

Pregnancy and gore (horror) concepts doesn't interest me and they look a bit weak, the rest is so so with few exceptions below


what I like , some interesting perspective.

BCS Glamour Photography wrote:
I would love a review when you have the time :-) Thanks

done

Pat Wilson Photography wrote:
Count me in.

Done