Brian Egendorf wrote:
I'd love to have you review my work.  Although, I half prefer you look at my Instagram @MainFragger than here.  My selection here is limited and my instagram is a little more fun and varied.

First impressions: Broad genre of work
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Cynic eroticism
Your Skill level: In the ballpark
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges:
some lack of dynamic range, highlights in this is way overblown.
Paid assignments: why not if you can get them.
What I like:
Best in Port:   https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/3250460

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I like the punk goth style and crooked poses in your photos. Iwon't comment in UV lighting because I am generally not interested.
Do you make my list?: No

Robyn Leslie wrote:
I would enjoy your feedback.Just did a non studio session.

First impressions: Vanilla port

Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Fashion Glamor

Your Skill level: Average

Your MM Profile usefulness: Very vague, prefer blank spaces generated by the space bar

Your challenges: Posing

Paid assignments: Yes for mainstream advertising.

What I like:

Best in Port:

What to delete: below photos are useless

If you wish to emphasize on your assets, this shot is inconsistent with the rest of your portfolio.
First of all, you are wearing the wrong size nylons. They are too short for you. They should be worn just about 5 inches below groin for the perfect glamorous vintage look.They are probably from Victoria's Secret, very dull shade and opaque. If anyone should model nylons they should pick some French Made 10-15 denier Cleo's RHTs. Your shoot angle should be around 3/4 so it would look more flattering more curvy.

I hate when photographers attempt to shoot lingerie boudoirs with shallow field of depth. Unless you wanted to have a random moment your posing is also wrong on this frame.

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You should focus on character modeling, your look is your brand. Acting career  also will work for you. Your glamor shots are so so. But could be improved. Practice in front to a full length mirror.

Do you make my list?: No

shibarifann wrote:
I'm game!

First impressions: BDSM Erotic fit and edgy +18 port
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: If you do your own rope work, well noted. Great job!
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your MM Profile usefulness: They will get the idea.
Your challenges: Some poses and concepts are very cliche
Paid assignments: Yes
What I like:   https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46104154 +18
Best in Port: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45309580 +18
What to delete:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You have good concepts and ideas but you are falling a bit short.
You could easily become your own brand in what you (like) to do. To do that, you need to add intrigue and seduction to your stories. Photographing slutty model behavior won't get you the grade but sophistication and intrigue body language and correct poses for this genre will help.
Do you make my list?: no

Mercedees wrote:
Please critique me! Thank you.

First impressions: Repetitive poses and redundant photos in port.
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Intrigue and "noir" comes to my mind
Your Skill level: Beginner
Your MM Profile usefulness: not helpful to advance your modeling.
Your challenges: Posing, same gaze to the camera, neutral body language.
Paid assignments: No
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You have some camera presence delete redundant photos, better yet delete all and restart with a real photographer to diversify your port and add some more looks.
Do you make my list?: no

Quentin Studios wrote:
Would love a critique. Cheers!

First impressions: Excellent Photography, Sensual and flattering
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Fashion Commercial Portraiture Beauty and more
Your Skill level: Advanced

Your challenges: some noted in quest of creative artistry
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45574773 +18
Best in Port:

What to delete:
not as strong, meh look on models (bad pose and posture) and incorrect exposure (overblown highlights, no sky color).

Tight crops won't always give you a good drama
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Excellent work. 
I wished you didn't cut off sneakers.
Do you make my list?: Yes

Fist Full of Ish wrote:
I'd love it!

First impressions: Some good Ideas, creative and excellent work in general.
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Fun and games
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your MM Profile usefulness: very informative

Paid assignments: yes
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30979945 +18
and

superbe!
Best in Port:
It's the model

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You know the best kept secret of a photographer which is to shoot someone who like to be photographed.Good job, keep it up
Do you make my list?: No

Mishelle portfolio wrote:
Let me know...

First impressions:   Cute modeling port, beautiful look.
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: still wondering
Your Skill level: impatient beginner
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges: Finding the right photographer will take you to the top
Paid assignments: TFCD
What I like:

What to delete: avoid Instagram style pics on Mayhem.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Keep shooting remove redundant photos from your port.
Do you make my list?: No

Harlequins Mask wrote:
People tell me that a lot of my work is old fashioned. I'd be interested to hear your thoughts, as I've been on this site almost ten years and I know that my work has evolved...but into what? Do let me know.

First impressions: Art nudes
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: art nudes
Your Skill level: good photography in general
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Your challenges:
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41084968 +18
Best in Port: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42033106  +18

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I am not interested in art nudes, they are not my thing and do respect photographers shooting this genre but I have no recommendations. Overall you are doing great. Old fashioned is actually great.
Do you make my list?: No

DG IMAGES wrote:
I would love to hear what you have to say

First impressions: Erotic vibes open leg shots
Your Work focus: erotic nude softporn https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33543190  ++18
Your Skill level: sufficient for the genre
Your MM Profile usefulness: Informative
Your challenges:   Your photos come across as random skin moments although some models do their best to save the day. Many are victim of unflattering and unfiltered poses. If you want your work to evolve you need to add a pinch of  "tactfulness in eroticism"

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I have no recommendations.

Do you make my list?: no

Varton wrote:

First impressions: Excellent Photography, Sensual and flattering
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Fashion Commercial Portraiture Beauty and more
Your Skill level: Advanced

Your challenges: some noted in quest of creative artistry
Paid assignments: yes
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45574773 +18
Best in Port:

What to delete:
not as strong, meh look on models (bad pose and posture) and incorrect exposure (overblown highlights, no sky color).

Tight crops won't always give you a good drama
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Excellent work. 
I wished you didn't cut off sneakers.
Do you make my list?: Yes

Thank you for taking the time! Appreciate the feedback on the close ups, those are shots i've been experimenting with

Khaega wrote:
I’d like a review if you ever get the chance

First impressions: Amateur feel, too many photos of the same set, similar poses.
Your Skill level: Beginner
Your creativity:  Photographer driven
Specific  style: Still searching
Your Work focus: Good fit for fitness and lifestyle
Your MM Profile usefulness: Pretty generic. It would be better state specific goals in desired markets
Your challenges: Pretty generic look and poses.
Paid assignments: No
Your money shot: none
What to delete:  All redundant photos
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: For all beginners I suggest that they customize their port on a specific area of this market they can influence or their skill set or look can lead and compete. Unfortunately yours can be forgotten as soon as they click the next button.
Do you make my list?: No

Oliviaanon123 wrote:
I’d like to know . I’m new I wouldn’t mind feedback that would help

First impressions: Classy, beautiful, comfortable in her own skin model
Your Skill level: Beginner
Your creativity:  Photographer driven
Specific  style: Good fit for commercial and fashion.
Your Work focus: Currently more on glamour side.
Your MM Profile usefulness: To the point.
Your challenges: Some awkward posing that can be corrected. Work with good photographers
Paid assignments: Possible in niche markets
Your money shot: Could not find one to qualify.
What I like:  but a very tight crop bottom chest.
What to delete:  first raw second or third photo which is redundant
bad pose
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: For nude art pick a photographer that know what he is doing. Your implied or nude samples are not much flattering. Focus a great deal on commercial modeling and lifestyle. Hire a good photographer and get rid of Instagram style photos. Good luck.
Do you make my list?: No

Dan OMell wrote:
me too!

by the way, very impressed by the amount of time and effort you invested reviewing so much ports!
I made a todo list to look at least some of them. unfortunately, the list is sorted alphabetically, not by value.
otherwise it could be easier to start from the very top of the leaning curve...

Thank you.
First impressions: Professionally crafted well composed dramatic and nostalgic at times.
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your creativity:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45831952 easy on the eyes
Specific  style: Artistic, faded colors,low contrast
Your Work focus: Art glamor some edits are weak for your port.
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: Your edits sometime fall short. I would blur the background more on this because the flower is distracting the main event. The crop is also very tight.
artificial and manufactured feel.
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46512739
What I like:  Excellent tonality and the drama perhaps a breakup.
What to delete: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You made your own art form of low contrast photos. They create a sad and faded mood and flashbacks  but may or may not strengthen your vision as a repetitive style. You are a good story teller and not a shooter for the sake of shooting.
Do you make my list?: Yes

Forrests Photos wrote:
If you would take a moment to comment I would appreciate it. Thanks for doing this for the community!!

First impressions: Art and landscape photographer
Your Skill level: Average
Your creativity:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9759397
Specific  style: nude art tactfully done
Your Work focus: beauty
Your MM Profile usefulness: basic
Your challenges: Editing may be deceiving at times.
Paid assignments: TFP
Your money shot:
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5988512
What to delete: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your work came across sometime lifeless, flat. I am not an artist and I am indifferent to nude art which I often perceive as boring. Your landscapes are also uninspiring and beauty of it is not enough emphasized. BW is also falling short with odd crops as seen here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/5186934
Do you make my list?: No

Liron Bat-El Dori wrote:
I'm in :-)

First impressions: A good port that focuses your area of interest
Your Skill level: Intermediate
Your creativity:  photographer
Specific  style: fashion, beauty, hair, glamour, makeup, fitness, swimsuits
Your Work focus: as above
Your MM Profile usefulness: spelling error in profile on swimsuits
Your challenges: Pretty generic posing
Paid assignments: Yes
What I like:  bad edit but I like it.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: No specific recommendations but some of your photos give the feel that was shot by amateurs..
Do you make my list?: No

photodw wrote:
Alright, I looked at your portfolio, and now I'm curious to see what someone thinks of mine.

First impressions: I see lingerie and some commercial catalog work accents but nothing grabs my attention.
Your Work focus: Lingerie nudes with an artistic flair.
Your MM Profile usefulness: My way or highway style.
Paid assignments: Yes
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46672768

Impressions: Light is off on some work and also dull generic poses could be avoided but good enough in product photography.
Do you make my list?: No

Xaina Fairy wrote:
May I participate, please? :-)

First impressions: Very nice and versatile port.
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Predominantly  Art, Beauty,
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful.
Your challenges: I would expect more intense expression and passion from you while posing, you appear absent in some photos. Yes body is there but mentally you are elsewhere. In this type of work you must engage the camera, be the subject not the object. But I see great posing abilities.
Paid assignments: Yes
What I like:   https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46628373 I like your pose although a very bad photo lighting wise and cropped tight on umbrella.
Best in Port: ,
also best black and white https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45066976
What to delete: Redundant landscape based poses. Just too many of them.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You will make any photographer look good. Most of the photo shopped fairies in your port appears at best tacky.
Do you make my list?: No

San Cvz wrote:
me tooo !!!

First impressions: Beginner port with some good images to get hired.
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Still exploring for the best fit.
Your Skill level: Beginner.
Your MM Profile usefulness: Not much there to get to know your goals and interests.
Your challenges: Posing. In some cases your expressions are either overdone or not enough to support the niche.
Paid assignments: For commercial photography.
What I like: this one  probably represent you  best in the port.
Best in Port: Money shot and the strongest to get you paying gigs.
What to delete: doesn't do you any good there.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You have potential but your priority should be working with good photographers and focus on your niche market.
Do you make my list?: No

Qandrew wrote:
I would really appreciate your review of my portfolio. Many thanks. Andrew

First impressions: Great port,
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: Mainly  fitness / physique
Your Skill level: I would say great healthy advanced photography,
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point
Your challenges: Not a challenge but I would suggest also adding some next door guy style photos e.g. business male fashion etc. Your Port is limited by  " statuesque "  look.
Paid assignments: Yes.
What I like:
Best in Port: All are great photos
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You will do well as fitness brand ambassador photographer. Great port good luck.
Do you make my list?: No

GLS Photography Studios wrote:
I'm game... Critique away

First impressions: Versatile multi genre
Your Creativity/Style/Work focus: portraiture beauty etc
Your Skill level: Good job in general.Intermediate
Your MM Profile usefulness: Vague but they will get it
Your challenges: Model driven. Meaning they control the shoot, not you.
Paid assignments: Yes
What I like: Your hi keys are fine but too tight
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I see some odd crops and overly blown pics as in https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46778861 although this would not bother many but suggest you don't know "where" your light is coming from or where it will reflect back to your lens. Many of your models are chopped at their forehead as a style of crop but doesn't work for me. You also cut off extremities https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46778978 such as hands etc. I feel it is a lack of attention to details and cutting off extremities is bad for professional photography.e.g. In this last photo foliage negates the sensual effect of  boots and lingerie. Hence concepts and wardrobe are seen in obvious conflict in your photos.
Do you make my list?: No

Dead Eye Photo wrote:
Just getting back into this after a ten year pause.  Let's get the ball rolling.  Bring it on.  :-)

Sorry for the unavoidable delay in addressing your request;

First impressions: your work come across as pretty generic in concepts and execution. I see there some inconclusive ideas and shortfalls.
Your Style/Work focus: portraiture beauty glamor boudoir etc
Your Skill level: I don't sense a good control on ambient light. Poor dynamic range on the background in this  and also I won't call a portrait as glamor as nothing glamorous there . Also overblown highlights is an eye sore.

Your MM Profile usefulness: I totally understand where this is coming from but " looks verification"  section is very amusing. Good luck.
Your challenges: model motivation seem to lack, I don't see any sparks in their eyes. Meh looks  tight cropped arm edges, random crops

Paid assignments: TFP
What I like:

Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your b&w nudes seem pretty boring. Color  glamor work lacks sensuality. You will do better if you can create a narrative in your shoots and aim for a purpose. Although your work is usable it is not quite there to be remembered.
Do you make my list?: No